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Classroom Management Philosophy (Written February 2018)
Aligned to INTASC Standard 5: Motivation and Management
Aligned to INTASC Standard 5: Motivation and Management
Classroom
Management Philosophy
I
believe that flexibility is a key trait for any secondary educator as they will
interact with well over 100 students in a single day and it is this principal
idea that I will attempt to integrate into my own future classroom, as my
mentor teacher has in hers for 30 years. As an educator, I understand that
there are a myriad of factors that can impact a student’s daily behavior,
attitude, and abilities and that it is my role to ensure that learning takes
place despite these extraneous conditions. What this will require is a
well-constructed classroom management plan that includes plans to implement
routines and behavioral expectations as well as information detailing how I can
use my classroom management plan to meet the needs of diverse students and to achieve
learning goals as well as to effectively increase family involvement.
First,
I must consider the atmosphere of my classroom. I want my students to feel
welcomed, respected, and safe in my classroom environment. One of the ways I
can do this is to decorate the classroom in a way that feels friendly while it
is also informative and relevant to the subject matter; between informational
posters and student work, this seems easy to accomplish. One of the keys to
making sure that students feel welcome in your classroom, however, has less to
do with decor and more to do with how you interact with the students.
Developing a positive but respectful rapport with your students is incredibly
important to positive engagement and positive classroom management. If the
students do not respect you as the teacher and authority figure, it will be
harder to manage them. I plan to address this with my students very soon after
the school year starts by telling them that as long as they demonstrate to me
the same kind of respect that they want, I am more than happy to reciprocate. I
think this is particularly important at the high school level as students are
rapidly moving towards adulthood.
I
plan to implement a number of procedures and routines in my classroom including
the use of “bell-ringers” and absent work and to implement these, I will
introduce them at the beginning of the school year and spend the first few
weeks reminding students of the steps while practicing them. This will ensure
that the steps are firmly cemented in their memories and I will not need to
spend valuable class time explaining the steps every day. The behavioral
expectations set for my class will be largely decided by the school and the
district unless it appears that the combination of students in my classroom
plus the combination of allowances by the rules are creating a problem in my
classroom. At that point, I will be required to update the rules as I see fit;
the students will be informed of this at the beginning of the school year and
again at the beginning of the second semester. When it comes to handling
behavior issues from students who cause a particular problem on their own, I
plan to address these students away from the rest of the class and to attempt
to get to the bottom of their problems so I can actually help make a difference
with whatever issue they’re having.
Another
aspect of classroom management is engaging in a way that allows you to meet the
diverse needs of a diverse student population, that helps students to achieve
learning goals, and that works to involve families. In order to meet the needs
of my diverse students, I plan to get to know them. As many students will come
to my classroom without their Gifted and Talented/ ESL status, 504/IEP plans,
or mild learning-disabilities announced, I will have access to that information
through my district-regulated roster and attendance system and should be able
to scan through the list of my students and easily identify which ones may need
a greater level of assistance compared to the other students. These students
will be attended to in various ways. Standing by the student with ADHD to help
him focus, or stopping to double-check that the girl in ESL totally understood
the directions are both ways I can do this. If one class has a higher ratio of
G/T students than the others then I can provide that class with a more
difficult level of instruction and practice than the other classes. All of
these things can change radically from class to class and school year to school
year and thus we see again that flexibility is required in all aspects.
To
meet achievement goals, I will differentiate the way that I engage with the
students. Increasing the amount of formative assessment as necessary by the
class and the students to ascertain which groups will require increased rates
of reteaching than others and which aspects of my field seem to cause them the
greatest amount of problems. This will mean that different classes have an
increased focus on things like grammar and writing while others may take an
emphasis on interpretation and analysis of written works. Ultimately, it is my
job to teach what they need to know and this can only be determined after
working with them for some time and assessing what they already know. In
regards to engaging with families, I can attempt to engage as much as possible
but at the high school level, parents tend to have backed off on pursuing their
child’s academics and may not see much reason to continue a higher level of
involvement that they did at the elementary school level. While they may be
wrong in this, I cannot simply change their minds but I can encourage them to
know about what we’re learning. One way I can do this is to send out a monthly
email that details what we’ll be focusing on in that class during that month
and to warn them ahead of time if there are any large projects coming up or any
extra supplies that they will need to obtain.
As explained, my classroom management philosophy attempts to take a holistic
approach to management. I plan to approach my students with respect and to
treat them like the young adults they are and the grown adults they aspire to
be. I will attempt to engage families and to reach students in ways that make a
difference and help them to improve and grow as people. I ascribe to the ideal
stance of flexibility and maintain that this may be the single-most important
trait for a teacher to have. Ultimately, I plan to approach classroom
management not as a dictator or imposing source of knowledge but as a guide and
mentor.
Classroom Management Plan (Written October 2015)
Aligned to INTASC Standard 5: Motivation and Management
My Philosophy of Classroom Management
The classroom
consists of more than simply desks and chairs - also necessary are a welcoming
atmosphere, a healthy culture of motivation, support, open communication, and a
straight-forward approach to education and its benefits. There are a number of
ways in which a teacher can promote a welcoming atmosphere and a community that
supports itself and renews its own motivation, but large groups of people are
naturally accompanied by chaos, and it is this that necessitates the use of
rules, consequences, and procedures. Teachers must be able to find a delicate
balance between order, control and making learning fun to ensure student
engagement. The culture that develops within a classroom is dependent on
several factors with the most important of these being respect, student
engagement, and clearly outlined roles for students and teacher. A relationship
between teacher and student that is built on respect ensures that both parties
are listening to the needs of the others and that they are thoughtful when
making choices that will impact the other; it demonstrates to the student that
the teacher genuinely wants to act as a support to them. Students who feel
respected are more likely to be respectful, to put more effort into their work
because they feel valued, and to contribute to a classroom culture in a
beneficial way. Another important factor in classroom culture is that of
student engagement. Students who are more consistently engaged in the classroom
are more likely to be motivated in that subject and thus to learn more and on a
deeper level. Finally, having clearly defined roles for students and teacher
provides a number of benefits. It serves to remind students that their job is
to learn while the teacher's job is to teach and to provide structure, and this
helps students to focus on their education while allowing teachers to focus on
teaching; overall it helps to make the classroom a more effective environment
by eschewing distractions.
Overarching
Goals:
Playing into the
ideas outlined above, the overarching goals within my classroom are very
simple; students will learn what the teacher has to teach. Through the
procedures laid out in my classroom management plan, I will be able to
streamline the in-between necessities that keep a classroom afloat and this
will help to streamline the learning process and prevent and eliminate chaos.
With the help of the rules laid out in my classroom management plan, my
students will be able to very easily identify the behaviors that are not
acceptable in my classroom and to avoid them. The consequences presented in my
classroom management plan are present to show students that when they feel the
need to ignore the rules, there are consequences for their behavior just as
there would be for breaking the laws in general society as an adult. The reward
system teaches my students that positive actions and positive behavior can be
rewarded with positive consequences while it avoids rewarding them outright for
the behavior that they should be demonstrating without being reminded or for
learning what they should be learning simply because it is their job to learn.
Classroom Procedures
Procedure
title: Entering Class and Arriving Late
Objective
Students will enter the classroom in a calm and
orderly fashion in order to avoid chaos and unnecessary excitement. Students
will be prepared for the day’s activities and will immediately be prepared for
the ‘Bell-Ringer’, thus avoiding undue disruption and demonstrating a desire to
learn and behave appropriately.
This procedure is in place to ensure that there is
no precious time wasted or undue chaos and confusion in this classroom.
When procedure will be introduced, modeled, practiced and the
frequency:
The procedure will be introduced on the first day
of class and reviewed on the second. The teacher will model the procedure both
times for students to observe. The procedure will be practiced every day until
the procedure becomes habitual and routine for the classroom.
Assessment and Feedback
Positive feedback will be given to students who
demonstrate all of the correct steps in this procedure without prompting.
Students who do not correctly demonstrate all of the steps in this procedure
without being prompted will be encouraged to re-examine the steps and reminded of
the importance of following classroom procedures.
Procedure Steps or Activity
Entering the Classroom:
1.
Students will wait quietly in the hallway until Mrs.
Miller opens the classroom door and/or until all students from the previous
class have left.
2.
Students will quickly and quietly enter the classroom
and take their assigned seats.
3.
There will be a warm-up assignment (the Bell-Ringer)
written on the board or on the overhead projector. Students will begin this
assignment immediately.
4.
Students will have until five minutes after the tardy
bell has rung to complete the Bell-Ringer.
5.
Upon completing the Bell-Ringer, students will sit
quietly at their desk and wait for further instructions from Mrs. Miller.
Late Arrival:
1.
Students who arrive after the tardy bell has rung will
be counted as late in the attendance record. Three or more late arrivals during
a grading period will result in a referral to the front office and Mrs. Miller
will notify parents/guardians.
2.
Students who arrive after the tardy bell with a note
that excuses them will be excused from being marked late.
3.
If you have a note, present it to Mrs. Miller upon
arrival.
4.
Take your seat quickly and quietly without disturbing
your classmates.
5.
Mrs. Miller will make sure that you receive any
handouts that you may have missed and your desk-neighbor may be asked to
quickly fill you in on what has happened in class.
6.
If you need more help on catching up on what you may
have missed, please let Mrs. Miller know.
Procedure title: Hall, Bathroom, and
Emergency Passes
Objective
The classroom cannot always remain undisturbed but
procedures can be put in place that make it easier and more orderly to leave
and return to the classroom without disturbing your classmates.
This procedure is in place to ensure that there is
no precious time wasted or undue chaos and confusion in this classroom.
When procedure will be introduced, modeled, practiced and the frequency
The procedure will be introduced and modeled on the
first day of class and reviewed on the second. The procedure will be practiced
every day, as necessary, until the procedure becomes habitual and routine for
the classroom.
Assessment and Feedback
Positive feedback will be given to students who
demonstrate all of the correct steps in this procedure without prompting.
Students who do not correctly demonstrate all of the steps in this procedure
without being prompted will be encouraged to re-examine the steps and reminded
of the importance of following classroom procedures.
Procedure Steps or Activity
Hall Passes:
1.
If you are given a hall pass ahead of time that
requires that you leave the class while it is in session, please let Mrs.
Miller know as you enter the classroom.
2.
If you are sent a hall pass during class, let Mrs.
Miller know if you will be back or if you will miss the rest of class so that
she can make sure you get the rest of the work you need before you leave.
3.
When returning to class, please return calmly and
quietly to your desk and resume working as you were before you left.
Bathroom Passes:
1.
Each student will be given three bathroom passes per
quarter to use during class.
2.
The best time to use the bathroom is in between
classes.
3.
If you need to use a pass during class, do not
interrupt Mrs. Miller if she is giving a lecture. Wait until the class has
turned to individual work so that you won’t disturb your classmates.
4.
Bring your bathroom pass paper to Mrs. Miller and she
will stamp on space off of it. Now you may go to the bathroom.
5.
Only one student is allowed to go to the bathroom at a
time.
6.
When you return to class, please return calmly and
quietly to your desk and resume working as you were before you left.
7.
Please try to be quick about using the bathroom – class
time is very valuable to everyone. If you abuse the bathroom pass privilege,
you will lose it.
Emergency:
1.
If you feel suddenly ill, please let Mrs. Miller know
by raising your hand. She will give you her classroom hall pass.
2.
You may go to either the nurse’s office or the
bathroom.
3.
If you need to go home, the front office will let Mrs.
Miller know.
4.
If you are feeling better, please return to class as
quickly as possible so that you do not fall behind your classmates.
5.
Please do not abuse this system – you should not become
ill very frequently. You are being trusted not to take advantage of the
emergency hall pass system.
Procedure title: Leaving Class
Objective
Students will leave the classroom in a calm and
orderly fashion in order to avoid chaos. Students will not leave until Mrs.
Miller says they may. Class time is very valuable for everyone. Rushing to
leave class can cause items to be forgotten, can cause important things to go
unheard, and can cause class to stay later because of the disruption it
creates.
This procedure is in place to ensure that there is
no precious time wasted or undue chaos and confusion in this classroom.
When procedure will be introduced, modeled, practiced and the frequency
The procedure will be introduced and modeled on the
first day of class and reviewed on the second. The procedure will be practiced
every day until the procedure becomes habitual and routine for the classroom.
Assessment and Feedback
Positive feedback will be given to students who
demonstrate all of the correct steps in this procedure without prompting.
Students who do not correctly demonstrate all of the steps in this procedure
without being prompted will be encouraged to re-examine the steps and reminded
of the importance of following classroom procedures.
Procedure Steps or Activity
Leaving the classroom:
1.
Class time is very valuable to everyone. Please do not
waste class time by preparing to leave class before Mrs. Miller is ready to
dismiss you.
2.
Before you are dismissed, please make sure that you
have written the day’s homework assignment into your planner.
3.
When Mrs. Miller says that you may, gather all of your
belongings. Please make sure not to forget jackets, books, pencils, et cetera.
4.
Please make sure that your desk and the area around it
are clean and ready for the next group of students. If you see trash, please
throw it away even if it is not yours.
5.
If Mrs. Miller says you may, you may line up before the
door in an orderly, calm, and quiet fashion.
6.
The classroom door will remain closed until Mrs. Miller
gives permission to open the door and leave.
Procedure title: After You Have Been Absent
Objective
Students who are absent are more likely to fall
behind in school work because they were not present for the lessons that their
classmates were there for. It is very important that students try as hard as
possible to catch-up the rest of the class following an absence. The “While you
were gone…” basket is used in this classroom to ensure that students who miss
class are able to quickly find and collect the papers they need to make up
missed work.
This procedure is in place to ensure that there is
no precious time wasted or undue chaos and confusion in this classroom, as well
as to make sure that every student has the opportunity to stay up-to-date with
their school work.
When procedure will be introduced, modeled, practiced and the frequency
This procedure will be introduced and modeled on
the first day of school. The procedure will be reviewed again on the second day
of school. The procedure will be practiced in the classroom whenever a student
misses a class period, with reminders as necessary for students who struggle to
remember the procedure.
Assessment and Feedback
Positive feedback will be given to students who
demonstrate all of the correct steps in this procedure without prompting.
Students who do not correctly demonstrate all of the steps in this procedure
without being prompted will be encouraged to re-examine the steps and reminded
of the importance of following classroom procedures.
Procedure Steps or Activity
Informing the school of an excused absence:
1.
A parent or guardian must call the front office to
excuse an absence by 9am the day that the absence occurs.
2.
Any absence not excused with be listed as an unexcused
absence. Three or more unexcused absences within a semester will result in a
referral to the front office to discuss truancy issues and a notice to parents
and guardians.
3.
Too many absences will result in consequences, will
effect grades, and may require dropped classes, an IEP, and legal action. This
school and district do enforce the Colorado state truancy laws.
Retrieving missed work in Mrs. Miller’s class:
1.
After you’ve been absent, check with Mrs. Miller to
make sure that you have not missed any tests or anything else that would
require teacher supervision to complete.
2.
Check in the “While you were gone…” basket kept on the
back counter of the classroom next to the homework submission bin.
3.
Ask Mrs. Miller how long you will have to complete each
of the missing assignments to receive full points. She will determine this
based on how long you were absent, how large each assignment is, and what is
coming up in the class schedule.
4.
If you need to take a test that you missed when you
were absent, Mrs. Miller will help you pick a date that she can give you the
test after school once you have studied all of the relevant material.
5.
Turn in your completed absent homework in to Mrs.
Miller herself, not to the homework submission box.
Procedure title: Extra Credit Opportunities
Objective
Students may encounter a time when their grade is
lacking – this may happen for many different reasons. Mrs. Miller wants to help
her students succeed in any way possible and to teach them that a little extra
hard work can go a long way. The extra credit opportunities that Mrs. Miller
offers are designed to enhance your current understanding of the English
language and of literature and to strengthen your reading comprehension skills.
This procedure is in place to ensure that there is
no precious time wasted or undue chaos and confusion in this classroom.
When procedure will be introduced, modeled, practiced and the frequency
This procedure will be introduced and modeled on
the first day of school and reviewed again on the second day of school. The
frequency with which it is practiced will vary from student to student. This is
because some students will be willing to make the extra effort required to earn
the extra points and others will not while other students simply will have no
need to.
Assessment and Feedback
Positive feedback will be given to students who
demonstrate all of the correct steps in this procedure without prompting.
Students who do not correctly demonstrate all of the steps in this procedure
without being prompted will be encouraged to re-examine the steps and reminded
of the importance of following classroom procedures.
Procedure Steps or Activity
Extra Credit Opportunities:
1.
Mrs. Miller offers two different options for extra
credit;
a.
You may choose to read a short story from a collection
that Mrs. Miller suggests and then you may write a 1,000+ word essay explaining
the literary elements within the story.
b.
You may select any of Shakespeare’s sonnets, complete a
poem interpretation worksheet about the sonnet of your choosing and then give a
dramatic reading of that sonnet before your classmates.
2.
If you would like to complete one of the above options
for extra credit, let Mrs. Miller know ahead of time so that she can help you
locate any necessary resources.
3.
Extra credit may only be done once per quarter and has
the ability to greatly impact your grade, so take the opportunity very
seriously.
Rules, Consequences, and Reward System
Rules:
·
Be prompt and prepared (in your seat with
all of the things you will need for class when the bell rings).
·
Respect the teacher, respect your
classmates, and respect yourself.
·
Take control of your learning; always give
your very best.
·
Make sure that the classroom is ready for
the next class before you leave it (all trash thrown away, chairs pushed in,
desks straight, boards clear, et cetera).
·
Cell phones need to be placed into the
cellphone pocket on the front blackboard before we begin – all other
electronics must remain in your bags. No electronic usage is allowed without
teacher permission.
Consequences:
·
First infraction: Warning from teacher in
private conference
·
Second infraction: E-mail/call to
parent/guardian
·
Third infraction: Written referral to the
front office and scheduled conference between teacher/parent/student.
·
Extreme infractions: Student sent directly
to or escorted to the front office, result may be in-school or out-of-school
suspension, expulsion, or legal action as necessary.
Reward
System:
The Modified Marble Jar
System
Supplies needed:
·
1 large jar per class, labeled with the
class title and class period number and divided into quarters from the bottom
up with stickers.
·
As many marbles as are needed to fill all
of the jars together.
Students can earn marbles
to drop into their class's jar in several ways:
·
1 marble for each 100% earned on a Unit Test
(this means that during a Unit Test, a class can earn a good number of
marbles).
·
1 marble for following the classroom
procedures without issue or reminders from Mrs. Miller (first two weeks of
school only) per procedure
·
1 marble per act of positive behavior and
good citizenship that is "above-and-beyond the call-of-duty".
·
1 marble for every day that there is
perfect attendance
·
1 marble for every day that everyone turns
in their homework
·
1 marble for every day that there are no
reminders to not use personal technology in class
·
1 marble for every day that there are no
reminders to not speak when Mrs. Miller is speaking
We will discuss this list
in class and add extraordinarily positive and helpful behaviors as we need to.
Students can lose marbles
from the class jar in several ways:
· Inappropriate
outbursts in class
· Mrs.
Miller is unable to calm the class quickly
· A
poor report from a substitute teacher
· A
failure to follow directions as a class.
We will discuss this list
as a class and add negative behaviors deserving of consequence and loss of
marbles as we need to.
Rewards for earning
enough marbles to reach different sticker levels:
Level 1: An edible treat
from Mrs. Miller (cookies, candy, et cetera)
Level 2: A movie day with
a movie related to our current reading material
Level 3: A class vote on
upcoming reading material (vote between two short stories, two novels, or two
plays)
Level 4: A class vote
between an edible treat from Mrs. Miller or another movie day
If a class stays on
target and earns a steady number of marbles, a class should be able to earn
enough marbles to completely fill a jar by the end of the school year.
The
first class to completely fill their class jar will earn an extra surprise.
A
note about this system:
The marbles added to the
jars in my classroom will serve as a physical and visible reminder of the
progress that they have made as a class in regards to excellent behavior,
mastery of skills, the importance of working towards long-term goals, the
importance of teamwork, and as a physical form of verbal praise. The marble jar
system will be aligned with copious amounts of specific, verbal praise targeted
at praising effort rather than success to show to students that effort is what
we expect from them as students and that enough effort can lead to success.
Rationale
for rules, consequences, and reward system:
The rules, consequences,
and the reward system set forth in my classroom management plan have all been
chosen after a great deal of consideration to ensure that student exhibit the
best possible behavior at all times and that students understand why they are
expected to demonstrate excellent behavior.
The rules listed above
were selected to minimize the chaos inherent in a classroom full of teenagers
and the time that could otherwise be wasted. They were also selected to make
sure that all members of the classroom are treated with respect and that they
feel like valuable members of the classroom environment. All who enter my
classroom will be treated with the utmost respect and will never made to feel
any less than they are. This is true whether they are students, teacher’s
aides, substitute teachers, administrative staff, or support staff. These rules
are set forth to ensure that our time in class together runs as smoothly as
possible so that as much learning as possible can take place without
interferences.
The consequences were
chosen to make sure that all students have the same amount of opportunity to
correct their negative behaviors and to ensure that all of the parties who are,
at least in part, responsible for helping to shape students into contributing
members of society are aware of the behaviors that need to be remedied.
Students must learn that negative behaviors are quickly followed by negative
consequences just as positive behaviors are quickly followed by positive
results.
The reward system
implemented in my future classroom will be a modified version of the
traditional and common marble jar system. I will use a modified version because
I do not believe that students in high school (ages 13-19) should be rewarded
for doing what they should already be doing without reminder. Instead, the
marbles added to the jars in my classroom will serve as a physical and visible
reminder of the progress that they have made as a class in regards to excellent
behavior, mastery of skills, the importance of working towards long-term goals,
the importance of teamwork, and as a physical form of verbal praise. The marble
jar system will be aligned with copious amounts of specific, verbal praise
targeted at praising effort rather than success to show to students that effort
is what we expect from them as students and that enough of it can lead to
success.
Communication with Parents/Guardians
Time and time again the importance of
parent and teacher interaction has proven to be a very influential factor on
student success. A healthy and positive relationship between teacher and parent
has the ability to help teachers "learn more about students' needs and
home environment, which is information they can apply toward better meeting
those needs" (American Federation of Teachers, 2007). Following
conclusively, then, is the idea that in order to build a positive
parent-teacher relationship, the parents must first be able to communicate with
the teachers. In today's technologically advanced society, where communication
constantly improves and evolves, it is important that teachers provide a
variety of ways through which they can communicate with parents and students.
Three very different, but equally important, ways that teachers can open the
channels of communication are through email, through the use of a mass
automated texting service, and through the maintenance of a classroom website.
Email:
Since the dawn of the home computer era, email
has grown to become one of the most dominant forms of communication and it is
because of this that teachers must and do remain diligent about regularly
checking and responding to their emails. Email has essentially become the
backbone of all parent-teacher communication because it is more convenient than
phone calls, as it can be read and responded to at one's convenience and it
provides the ability to quickly and easily attach documents that can be shared
digitally. It is also discreet in that parents and teacher are able to
communicate about sensitive and private matters that may be impacting their
students without the possibility of uninvolved parties overhearing. Email's
usefulness is only further enhanced by the fact that email retrieval services are
also available through a large percentage of cell phones. It is all of these
things combined that make email a formidable tool for parent-teacher
communication.
Automated
Mass-Text Service:
Playing into the idea that cellphones
continue to be a necessity for daily life, and that a vast majority of these
cell phones have the ability to send and receive text messages, an automated
mass text service would make an excellent tool for parent-teacher
communication. With this type of service, the teacher can select when to send a
text out and what the text would contain. Only those who had previously opted
into the service would receive the text messages so it would be an optional
form of communication. The texts sent out could contain reminders for parents
about upcoming assignment due dates and test dates or general information about
the class. Because of its versatile nature, students could also opt into the
text service and then both the parent and the student would be 'on the same
page' about the happenings in the classroom. Texting is a non-intrusive method
of communication because it can be viewed at one's leisure and does not require
immediate attention or response; this makes a mass-text service ideal for
simply sending out general purpose reminders to a large and diverse crowd of
people.
A
Classroom Website:
As with email, the advent
of the home computer system enabled the population to have access to the
world-wide-web and mankind's newfound dependence on it for information and
entertainment continues to grow exponentially. Another excellent way that
teachers can communicate with parents is through the development and
maintenance of a website dedicated to everything happening within the teacher's
different classes. A classroom website containing a page for each individual
course could be updated on a weekly basis with the syllabi, current assignment
instructions, lists of upcoming due dates, a calendar containing class and
school events, and other such similar things. Parents would find it very easy
to navigate such a site to locate more immediate methods of communication with
the teacher and may even find a "FAQ" (frequently asked questions)
section to be of great use. Similarly, having digital access to the items that
students would need for class would likely be reassuring for students who may
be prone to losing hard copies of information. The site would, of course,
provide the teacher's email address should the parent need to contact the teacher
in a more direct manner. Even including this, however, the classroom website
could prove to be a huge time-saver for a teacher who is frequently approached
with the same set of questions.
Student Engagement Strategies
There are a staggering number of
strategies that teachers can use to keep their students focused and engaged in
the lesson and thus more likely to retain the information being learned. Some
of these strategies simply involve a new method of delivering the material
while others involve complex arrangements for collaborative group work.
Think-Pair-Share:
Collaborative (Kagan, 1989)
One of these collaborative strategies is
called the Think-Pair-Share strategy. When using the Think-Pair-Share strategy,
the classroom could be very easily rearranged so that all of the students sat
in groups of two and these would be the groups that the students work in
throughout the duration of the task. First, the students are given the topic on
which they will think or the question that they need to answer and then they
will be given the time they need to form a set of complete thoughts. After this
the students will be given a set time in which they can collaborate with their
partner so that they can share their thoughts and continue the conversation in
the hopes that they can reach new and possibly surprising conclusions and
ideas. Following this, the teacher would move from group to group and ask their
thoughts on the task. The students would share their ideas and conclusion with
the class and conversation could follow from there. The benefits of this system
include that students are thinking and interacting in three different
situations; they think on their own, collaborate with their partner, and then
move onto class discussion. This allows students to see how differently
classmates work through the same issue and teaches them that they can learn
from each other. Essentially this holds to the old adage "two heads are
better than one".
Popcorn
Question-and-Answer: Teacher-led comprehension check
Another engagement
strategy that does not involve traditionally collaborative student work is a
modified version of the standard question-and-answer routine. Instead of a
passive environment with a teacher asking a question of the class as a whole
and then selecting a student to answer from only the students who have
volunteered an answer, the teacher warns the students at the beginning of the
lecture that students will be chosen at random to answer questions about the
lecture.
This is beneficial in several ways; firstly,
that this enables the teacher to involve those who are usually quiet in the
class discussion and to help drag those students who usually ‘drift off’
mentally back towards focusing, and secondly, it allows the teacher to check
all of the students for attention and comprehension rather than just the select
few who regularly participate in class.
Overall, this strategy
can help to provide a ‘level playing field’. By asking questions of those
students who participate in class less frequently, the less confident students
may be more encouraged to speak up in class. Similarly, if the students who
regularly participate in class are able to see that other students have the
ability to answer questions, too, they may be more likely to allow their
quieter classmates to answer questions as well.
The surprise factor in
this engagement strategy is what helps to keep students focused on the lesson.
If students do not know when they will be called on, they are less likely to
drift off in their own thoughts or to become distracted. The fear of being
caught off guard and not having the right answer would be, ideally, enough to
keep a majority of students focused on the material at hand.
In reality, any classroom
arrangement will work for this engagement strategy, though all student desks
should be facing towards the teacher’s desk to ensure that all parties are
appropriately focused and that the teacher is the center of the student’s
attention. This also makes it easier for the teacher to wander the classroom at
will and to help bring the students attention back to the lesson at hand simply
through proximity to the students.
Team
Word-Webbing: Collaborative (Kagan, 1989)
Another collaborative engagement strategy is that
referred to as “Team Word-Webbing”. This strategy takes a more traditional
approach to group projects and provides a fantastic opportunity for students to
learn to depend on each other in a positive way while highlighting the benefits
of collaborative thinking.
Instead of the small
groups of two students used in the Think-Pair-Share strategy, Team Word-Webbing
involves larger groups of no less than four, but ideally, six. This ensures
that all of the groups created are appropriately diverse in all of the ways
that are important, including background, skill sets, material comprehension,
and intra/extroverted personality types.
During the course of this
project-strategy combination, students are given a very large piece of paper
and asked to all write down the different and important parts of a task they
are given and to find new ways to connect them and to form a connected web out
of all of the separate ideas. This method of group idea examination would work
particularly well in an English class where students were required to read a
piece of literature and then were assigned into groups for Team Word-Webbing to
analyze the piece of literature and to uncover all of its important elements.
There are a great number
of benefits to this strategy with the most important being that it still
enables the necessary group discussion following the completion of a piece of
literature but provides some novelty that enhances student focus with the need
to be physically involved in the compiling of information. It shows students
that the combination of their knowledge and their combined brainstorming can
help them to come to complex conclusions about the piece through the power of
teamwork and combined new perspectives; it helps students to work together to
see the bigger picture of a lesson by recognizing all of the smaller connected
points. Beyond all of this, it helps students to practice important social
skills.
Professionalism
Teaching, an ancient and
truly noble calling, requires that one who wishes to be seen as a wise and
respectable teacher must first become so respectable and admired. The best way
to quickly and easily demonstrate oneself to be competent when amongst teaching
peers is by having and maintaining a polished and professional exterior towards
every aspect of interacting with people as a teacher. This includes the
parents, the students, the administrative school staff, and one’s teaching
colleagues. There are truly a stunning number of ways in which a teacher can
demonstrate professionalism; briefly, ten of these shall be examined here.
1.
Being polite, as simple as it may seem,
may be one of the most efficient means of demonstrating professional behavior
in today’s teaching field. This is efficient because students, fellow-teachers,
administrative workers, and the parents of our students simply want to be
respected as they help to further improve their student’s education.
2.
In regards to working with colleagues, one
must remember to not bring one’s home-related issues to work, while some
work-related issues must remain at work. One’s “dirty laundry” is not the
business of the students or of other teacher and needs to be eliminated from
one’s work life as it may serve as a distraction.
3.
Professionalism is very important when
dealing with students because without a professional demeanor, the students may
mistake you for a weak individual who will be lax with rule use and could let
an entire class get away with things. Teachers who always maintain a
professional demeanor around their students will be better able to begin
building respect into the student-teacher relationship.
4.
One very impactful way that teachers can
both demonstrate their professionalism and to build rapport with the front
office (thus the administrative staff) is to handle one’s own disciplinary
problems in one’s classroom rather than sending students to the front office
for minor indiscretions. This helps to streamline the issues that the
administrative staff deal with daily and demonstrates to them that you are
beyond competent in your profession.
5.
Parents respond well to a professional
attitude that always sets a positive outlook on student behavior. This means
that a simple and occasional phone call from teacher to parent with
unexpectedly positive praise goes a long way towards demonstrating a
professional demeanor and positive mindset.
6.
Parents, teachers, administrative staff,
and students can all be shown a level of professionalism through the classroom
management plan that is laid out for all to observe. Simple and effective
procedures, rules, consequences, rewards, and expectations go miles towards
demonstrating to all four parties that a teacher is professional in the way
that they are no-nonsense, straight-forward, and that they can break a job down
to its most basic elements before reconstructing them into a ‘well-oiled machine’.
7.
Another way to begin building respect
between the teacher and the student is to demonstrate to the student that the
teacher is professional and, as a professional, expects the same level of
professionalism from their students. Students flourish when they feel as though
they are valued, respected, and believed in and requiring a degree of
professional behavior from them is a simple way to convey this message.
8.
Teachers are those who have moved from
gaining knowledge to sharing knowledge, but in order to inspire a life-long
love of learning in one’s students, one must be willing to demonstrate one’s
own lifelong love of learning. Making it known, and demonstrating success, to the
administrative staff and the students shows that a teacher has chosen to continue
their own education. This bespeaks of a life-long love of learning and a
dedication towards one’s job, and a desire to better one’s self.
9.
Teachers can demonstrate their
professionalism by ‘giving credit where credit is due’, in other words, being
able to admit when an idea was not their own but the intellectual property of
someone else. This demonstrates to parents, teachers, and administrative staff
that the teacher acknowledges that education is often the result of a community
wide sharing of ideas and collaboration and not the end result of one single
human being. It also indicates a dedication to academic honesty.
10.
Lastly, teachers can communicate their
professionalism to both parents and students by ensuring that their students
know where the line lays between ‘fun teacher’ and ‘serious teacher’. In other
words, a teacher is able to lay down the idea that “teachers are teachers, not
friends” while still being able to maintain that teachers can be fun, friendly,
and can interact with their students in a way that helps to foster a strong and
healthy relationship but that does not jeopardize the safety or integrity of
any parties involved.
My own personal strengths
in working with each of these groups vary. I plan on working at the high school
grade levels, and this means working closely with teenagers from ages 13-19
with a wildly varying level of ability in my field of study (English). In
dealing with parents, I feel that I may have some advantage as I have children
of my own who are in school and I am in the process of developing relationships
with their teachers that are beneficial to all parties involved. This gives me
a unique perspective over a lot of other young teachers who may not have
children of their own yet and thus have not seen the parent’s list of needs
when it comes to a relationship with their child’s teachers. In dealing with
students, I feel that I may also have some slight advantage over other young
teachers in that I have two younger siblings who are currently high school aged
and there have been several times that I have approached them and asked their
opinions on some of their teacher’s behaviors. It is because of this that I
have a unique window into the teenaged-student’s mind and the way that they
perceive their teachers and schools. My skills in dealing with other teachers
and administrative staff are slim-to-none as I have nearly nothing to ‘go off of’
besides my own high school education and the interactions that I had with the
teachers there. However, I have always had a strong sense of respecting
authority which may come in handy, tied with a love of learning that helps me
to very quickly study and learn from a situation.
The one area that I could
greatly improve in is that of my dealing with administrative staff. I have so
little experience with them that they are still intimidating to me but, as with
most things, the more time that one spends around a person or group of people,
the less intimidating and the more human some figures become. I think what
would help me immensely in learning how to deal with administrative staff is to
read more on how administrative jobs in a school vary so vastly from the
teaching positions in a school. This would help to develop some more in-depth
insight on how they handle their daily activities. Similarly, finding the
principal of a local school and discussing with them at length a number of
things relating to how she views teachers, how she views students, and how she
views other administrative staff would also give me invaluable insight relating
to the nuances of an administrative position within the school.
Professionalism is such
an important concept for teachers to have considered, to have studied, and to
have mastered. Professionalism shows students that the teacher takes her job
seriously and that they should do the same. To parents, professionalism states
that the teacher is dedicated, enjoys their job and places a great deal of
value on making sure that everyone is being treated respectfully. To the
administrative staff of a school, and to the other teaching staff,
professionalism demonstrates that they are dedicated to the success of their
school, their field, their students, their class, and their coworkers. Without
a professional demeanor, teachers would simply be people who share information
that they once gained. Teachers with a professional demeanor have the ability
to help groom, shape, and nurture young minds in a way that others are not able
to. With great power comes great responsibility and with the responsibility of
shaping young minds come a need to act in a professional manner.
In Conclusion…
My classroom management model holds to three main
ideas; firstly that students must be allowed some kind of autonomy over their
education in order to take an interest in it, that certain procedures and
action plans must be put into place by those in a position of authority to
ensure a safe, effective, and positive learning environment, and that students
of a certain age should be held to the behavioral standards that society holds
adults to in order to prepare them for their imminent entry into adulthood. In
my classroom, I intend to create an environment that is welcoming, supportive,
positive, efficient, well-organized, a community in-and-of-itself, and that is
ultimately a place of learning. This can be done through a desk arrangement
that is conducive to learning and that makes students feel like equals, with
procedures that eliminate and prevent chaos, rules and consequences that mirror
those found in society, consistent communication with parents, a healthy
parent-teacher relationship, and the professional attitude and demeanor that
makes a teacher a positive role model for the students under their tutelage.
All of these ideas work together to create a seamless learning environment that
allows students to focus, encourages motivation, and helps to guide students to
the best possible academic outcome.
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STEP Standards
Aligned to INTASC Standards 1-10
STEP Standard
1 - Contextual Factors: Knowing Your School and Community
Part I: Community, District, School, and Classroom
Factors
A. Geographic Location
Pueblo, Colorado, is the 9th
largest town, by population, in the state. The town itself rests about two
hours South of Denver and is situated in the Arkansas River Valley, making it
perfect for its widespread agriculture. As of 2016, the total population of the
city was 110,295 (this includes only proper city limits and does not account
for the Suburb of Pueblo West outside of city limits but within commute
distance). Also, as of 2016, the 52.6% of the population was Hispanic, 42.2%
white, 2.1% African American, and 3.1% of the population identified as
multi-racial, Indian America, Asian, or Native Hawaiian or Pacific Islander.
The median income in Pueblo, Colorado, was $38,380 compared to the state median
of $65, 685 and the median rental home cost $787 as of 2016 (Pueblo, Colorado,
n.d.). In general, the area is considered low-income, especially when compared
to areas like Denver; about 41% of all Pueblo County residents qualify
financially to receive government assistance in healthcare (Roper, 2017).
B. District Demographics
Compared to other districts within
the state, Pueblo City Schools District 60 (a conglomeration of two earlier
districts in 1946) is considered to have a diversified student population, the
majority of which is comprised of minority ethnicities in the United States.
70.1% of the entire student population across the 31 schools are of Hispanic
ethnicity, 25.2% is white, and the remaining 4.7% is African American, Native
American Indian, Native Hawaiian or Pacific Islander, Asian, or multi-racial.
Of the 31 schools, four are high schools, two are k-8, one is 4-8, four are
middle schools, 18 are elementary schools, and two are charter-magnet schools.
The district has faced a good amount
of difficulty with funding and performance ratings in the last few decades and
were – at one point – facing intervention from the Colorado Board of Education
if they could not beat the “turn-around” clock. Just this week, it was
announced that many of the schools has passed recent reviews and the district could
present its “turn-around” and performance improvement plan to the Colorado
Board of Education in Denver. However, funding issues still loom and teacher contract
negotiations have left many feeling frustrated and unappreciated. The solution
at the start of the school year left many teachers extremely displeased and
many still consider strike and walk-outs to be a valid future option.
The district is largely a Title One
district, provides most of its students with free breakfast and lunch daily,
and the fundraising attempts appear to be endless. Per-pupil revenue amounts to
$7,550.73 per student, per year. The ESL/ELL students comprise 8.2% of the
total student population, Gifted and Talented create 3.2%, and 7.1% of the
student population registered as homeless (this could be due to the large
migrant farm workers that move through the area every year) (Demographics
2016-2017, n.d.). While the district has made large improvements recently, it
still has a long way to go as it still chronically underperforms compared to
the rest of the state.
C. School Demographics
East High School was opened in 1959
to serve two newer and growing neighborhoods on Pueblo’s North-East side. It is
one of four public high schools operated by the district and is the only D60
high school to integrate the International Baccalaureate program (Middle Years
Programme for grades 9 and 10 since 2011 and the Diploma Programme for grades
11 and 12 since 1996). East’s total student population has decreased in recent
years and throughout the school year, even, dropping from about 1,200 at the
beginning of the 2017-2018 school year to 1,046 by January 2018. The reason for
this appears to be the increased awareness of at-home online schooling
opportunities. As many of these students come from impoverished families, many
of them also hold jobs to help support their families and the online school
opportunity works better for those students than a regular school day would.
However, the school does expect to see a small student population jump during
the start of the next semester.
Of the 1,046-total student
population, they maintain a 51% Male and 49% female population. Like the
district demographics, most of the student population is Hispanic, totaling
73%, 21% white and the remaining 6% are comprised of African America, Native
American Indian, Native Hawaiian or Pacific Islander, Asian, or multi-racial
students. The average ACT score for the school was 18.1, lower than the state
average, in the 2016 school year and since then, the district has moved away
from the ACT and towards implementing a series of tests designed to help
students prepare for the SAT. The school is administering the PSAT test next
week and the results from that should be available in two or so weeks. The
first PSAT administered in September showed promising results indicating
improvement across the board for East, particularly in the Honors level courses
and showed that East was several points ahead of the other three district high
schools. However, even with this improvement, East still has miles of
improvement ahead of them before they can hope to compete with the state
averages.
Of the classes that I am directly involved
with, 4 of the 5 are Honors level courses. Because of this, there tends to be a
slightly higher population of female students than male. students in my classes
and the number of Gifted and Talented students within my classes is higher than
it is throughout the district. However, of the three 9th grade
classes that I will be teaching my unit to, only two are honors. This means
that I may have to accommodate the level of instruction or the time spent
working towards understanding the concepts when I teach it to the first set of
9th graders, of whom none are Gifted and Talented and two of them
are current ELL, having not yet exited the program while another two are also
on IEPs and one of them has unlabeled behavioral issues.
STEP Standard 1 - Contextual Factors: Knowing Your School
and Community
Part II: Demographic, Environment, and Academic
Factors
A.
Student
Demographic Factors
The demographic information for the
students that I encounter daily closely mirrors the demographic information of
the district and the school in general with a few exceptions. I work with 5
total different ELA classes, two 10th grade Honors ELA and two 9th
grade Honors ELA as well as one standard level 9th grade ELA class.
Ages range from 13-16. Between all five classes, there is a 41% male population
and a 59% female population (125-total students, 51 males, 74 female); this
seems to be indicative of an overall trend with Honors and advanced classes
across the United States. Backing this up is that the only one of the 5 classes
with a gender split that does not favor female students is the standard 9th
grade ELA where there is an even 50-50 split. Of these students, the ethnicity
split is much the same as the general school demographics – a majority are
Hispanic, a smaller percentage is white, and an even smaller percentage is
African American and Asian. Within my classes, there are no Native
Hawaiian/Pacific Islander or Native American Indian students. Their
socioeconomic information is also representative of the schools’; they all
receive free breakfast and lunch daily and many do not have the money to buy a
complete set of school supplies at the start of the school year.
B.
Environmental
Factors
The physical classroom is large
enough to comfortably seat 36 students though the largest class size is only
29. The desks are small tables and are arranged in 9 groups of 4 each, with
groups of 3-4 students facing each other in a square. There is a space for the
teacher at the front of the room and her desk and auxiliary tables are in the
back of the room. The front wall of the classroom is all one long whiteboard
and a projector hangs from the ceiling at the back of the room, set up to
project on a smart board that was installed and then promptly forgotten when
the projector was installed. The teacher has given me my own space at the front
of the room, in an empty corner, next to a filing cabinet. A large closet-like
cabinet is at the back of the room that contains some novels, less used
materials, cleaning supplies, and other miscellaneous items. Another cabinet
contains frequently used worksheets, and book shelf at the front of the room
holds a complete class set of textbooks – two different set of literature
books, one for 9th grade and one for 10th, as well as a
class set of grammar books for 9th and 10th grade. The
books have been in use for the district for at least 20 years and are – largely
– outdated, though the materials contained within them are still teachable. The
classroom has two doors – one that leads to the main hallway and another that
leads to the “media center” where there are study tables and a class set of
computers. East High School does not have a traditional library.
Technology can be reserved for a
class several weeks ahead of time – though reservations go quickly – and there
are only so many carts available. Each cart contains a class set of laptops and
the students know their computer login information. The ELA department has been
fighting to make sure that a cart of laptops is available exclusively for the
ELA department since they make such frequent use of them. Thus far, the
district has been uncooperative. The laptops are frequently used for testing
and typing in the ELA department and having them unavailable can hinder the
progress of the class in producing typed materials (which are infinitely easier
for teachers to grade as they remove the hassle of deciphering student
handwriting).
Parental involvement appears
typical. The concerned parents reach out and try while others appear content to
let the student handle their education independently and others seem to care
very little or to simply not value education. A few examples immediately come
to mind; one morning, a parent called the classroom to confirm that the teacher
had received the money necessary to purchase the novel needed for class,
another immediately texted a student who was accidentally marked absent,
another called at the beginning of the school year to demand to know why
classic novels like Moby Dick and Les Miserable weren’t being taught, and
another – disappointingly – has decided that since his wife left him, his
oldest daughter will be in charge of her 4 younger siblings despite her poor
health, making it nearly impossible for her to actually attend class. Despite this,
it seems to be a balanced mix and it seems that most parents allow their high
schoolers the autonomy you would expect at that age and grade level.
C.
Student
Academic Factors
Student Subgroup
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ELL
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IEP
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Section 504
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Gifted
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Other Services (Explain)
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Behavior or Cognitive Needs Receiving No Services
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Boys
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4
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2
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0
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12
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0
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0
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Girls
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6
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1
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1
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11
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0
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0
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Instructional Accommodations
and Modifications
(Describe any instructional accommodations and modifications
regularly used to meet the needs of students in each subgroup.)
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When students
complete their vocab words, they include an illustration that helps them
retain the meaning of the word. This is commonly employed with ESL students
as a memory device.
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Adhering to the
student’s IEP plan is the best choice for these students. Allowing them extra
time to complete work or to take tests is frequently employed for them.
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The one student that
has a 504 in place does not frequently attend class, likely because of her
health issues, but her 504 dictates that she is allowed extra time to
complete all assignment and tests.
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All the G/T students
are in Honors courses and so their coursework is already more challenging
than it would be in a standard class. On top of this they also have an
increased number of vocabulary words.
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In the space below, discuss
the possible affect these characteristics could have on the planning, delivery,
and assessment of your unit. Refrain from using student names.
The classes that I will be teaching
this unit to include both 9th grade Honors ELA and the 9th grade
standard ELA. Ultimately, this include all three IEP students, 5 ESL students,
and 10 Gifted/Talented students. The majority of the IEP and ESL students are
all in one class – the standard 9th grade ELA class. To accommodate
these students, I will have to closely monitor their understanding of the topic
through frequent formative assessment questions, asked to reveal to me their
understanding and to help them clarify their own. I will also need to allow the
IEP students to possibly have more time or to offer to work with them during
one of our planning periods later in the day to help them fully understand the
material.
Other options for aiding in the IEP
students understanding is to group them with other students who have shown
understanding of the topic – this would be easily enough accomplished as I
already plan on having the students work in groups to complete the assignment.
To help the ESL students, I plan on providing the key vocabulary words ahead of
time, allowing them time to define and study the meaning of those terms
beforehand and by providing ample explanation of the meaning as well as the
application of those terms. Also included in the lesson will be a good number
of examples of the terms in action. I will also be presenting a YouTube video
that explains the terms and presents examples while also providing visual
memory cues. After the completion of the project, the exemplary examples of the
assignments will be posted on the classroom walls to serve as a visual reminder
of the terms and their uses.
To provide a higher level of
challenge for the Honors/Gifted and Talented students that the standard 9th
grade ELA class will not require, I will be including some restrictions on
their options for completing the project and may include a secondary assignment
asking them to make use of the literary devices we are studying. Also, the
Honors class will need to know and understand these literary devices to make
use of them on the SAT later in the year and in upcoming unit tests and written
assignments, particularly during the ‘argumentative essay unit’.
STEP Standard 2 - Writing Standards-Based Objectives
and the Learning Goal
Unit Topic: Rhetorical Analysis; Ethos, Pathos, Logos, and
Connotation
Unit Title: Rhetorical Analysis
National or State
Academic Content Standards
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.4
Determine the meaning
of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative,
connotative, and technical meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of specific
word choices on meaning and tone (e.g., how the language of a court opinion
differs from that of a newspaper).
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.6
Determine an author’s
point of view or purpose in a text and analyze how an author uses rhetoric to
advance that point of view or purpose.
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.9-10.3
Evaluate a speaker’s point of view, reasoning, and use of
evidence and rhetoric, identifying any fallacious reasoning or exaggerated or
distorted evidence.
Learning Goal
Students will be able to identify the most commonly employed rhetorical
devices with accuracy, demonstrating understanding of how these devices are
used in argumentative, persuasive, and rhetorical literature as well as in
their everyday lives.
Measurable Objectives
·
Students will be able to define rhetoric and
explain how ethos, pathos, logos, and word choice help to further the speaker’s
position or belief.
·
Students will be able to identify examples of
ethos, pathos, and logos in a well-known political speech.
·
Students will be able to identify words that
have either a positive or negative connotation and explain how that word choice
effects the overall tone, voice, and meaning of a piece of writing.
STEP Standard 3 - Assessment and Data Literacy
Pre-Assessment - Copy and paste the pre-assessment
you plan to use to assess the students’ knowledge of the topic prior to
implementing the unit lessons. Include the scoring criteria used to determine
whether the student Exceeds, Meets, Approaches, or Falls Far Below the
learning goal and measurable objectives.
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Rhetorical Analysis Pre-Test
1.
What is ethos?
a. An appeal to emotion
b. An appeal to trust
c. An appeal to reason
2.
What is logos?
a. An appeal to reason
c. An appeal to trust
a. An appeal to emotion
3.
What is pathos?
a. An appeal to trust
b. An appeal to emotion
c. An appeal to reason
4.
What is rhetoric?
a. An argument c. Political
discussion
b. Persuasive literature d. All the
above
5.
What is connotation?
a. The dictionary definition of a word c. Repeated beginning sounds
b. Repeated middle sounds d. The emotional
weight of a word
Scoring criteria:
The pre-test was given through the
site www.polleverywhere.com.
Students answered individually on a classroom set of computers while the
questions were displayed on the large projector screen and on their
individual screens. The data collected did not include individual scores but
provided the percentages of students answers for each of the prompts. For
example, the first question (“What is ethos?”) would have a certain
percentage of students answer “A”, a different percentage would answer “B”
and, and the remaining percentage would answer “C”. This means that for this
problem, there is no way to determine “nearly met expectations” because it is
a simple matter of if the students know what the term means.
My mentor teacher and I discussed
this quite a bit and decided that because it was only a pre-test and it was a
short one (also because of the chaos of the school week at that point) that
this would be the optimal situation. We also expected that we already knew
the results of the test so the lack of individual student information was not
something that we felt would be detrimental. Ultimately, all students still
need to learn this and will still have to go through the unit with the rest
of the class even if they completely passed the pre-test. It is because of
these reasons that we opted for a paperless and more general means of
assessment data.
The measurable objectives for this
unit are that students will be able to define ethos, pathos, logos, and
connotative words, and that they will be able to produce examples of ethos,
pathos, logos, and connotative words. Naturally, it would be difficult for
students to create examples for something that they do not yet understand so
this pre-test only assesses their ability to define those terms.
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Pre-Assessment
Data: Whole Class - Once you have assessed your students’ knowledge on
the topic, collect and analyze the pre-assessment data to determine if you
will need to modify the standards, learning goal, or measurable objectives
that will be addressed during instruction.
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Number of Students
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Exceeds
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This was not assessed
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Meets
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9th Grade Standard (2nd Period)
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Ethos: 5/21
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Pathos: 13/21
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Logos: 12/21
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Connotation: 8/21
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Rhetoric: 11/21
9th
Grade Honors (3rd Period)
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Ethos: 4/24
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Pathos: 6/24
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Logos: 10/24
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Connotation: 8/24
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Rhetoric: 15/24
9th
Grade Honors (4th Period)
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Ethos: 6/25
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Pathos: 9/25
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Logos: 8/25
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Connotation: 10/25
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Rhetoric: 17/25
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Approaches
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This was not assessed
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Falls Far Below
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9th Grade Standard (2nd Period)
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Ethos: 16/21
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Pathos: 8/21
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Logos: 9/21
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Connotation: 13/21
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Rhetoric: 10/21
9th
Grade Honors (3rd Period)
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Ethos: 20/24
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Pathos: 18/24
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Logos: 14/24
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Connotation: 16/24
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Rhetoric: 9/24
9th
Grade Honors (4th Period)
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Ethos: 19/25
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Pathos: 16/25
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Logos: 17/25
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Connotation: 15/25
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Rhetoric: 8/25
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Pre-Assessment Analysis: Whole Class
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All three classes:
Met Expectations
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Ethos: 16/70
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Pathos: 28/70
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Logos: 30/70
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Connotation: 26/70
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Rhetoric: 43/70
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Based on the results of the pretest administered
this week to my three classes of 9th grade honors/standard ELA
students, I think that the standards selected are appropriate. It is
painfully apparent that these students are not familiar with the concepts
tested on and that their grasp of persuasive/argumentative writing/speaking
is tenuous at best. As the unit I developed is brand new to myself and to my
mentor teacher, there is little we can do in the way of making changes until
after we have taught the unit and we see the post-assessment feedback. We
still feel that the standards, goals, and objectives are obtainable and
appropriate.
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If these tests would have been scored based on how many
questions students got correct, the scores would appear a great deal more
abysmal than they already are. For example, each class only had one single
question where more than half of the students selected the correct answer.
That means that for most of the students, their scores would have been about
20% or so. Without individual student information, this is impossible to
guarantee but the gathered data appears to support this.
I am already aware of the class period (2nd
period – Standard 9th Grade ELA) that will require a greater deal
of explanation when it comes to understanding the concepts (I could even go
so far as to predict the students that will struggle with the concepts even
after explicit instruction and guided practice). As the unit is brand new to
both myself and my mentor teacher, there is little that we can predict in the
way that most students will react to it and the best that I can possibly do
is to take each thing as it comes and to just roll with it. That means that
if a student asks the same questions a dozen times, all I can do is to work
with that student to help them understand and to determine what the gap in
their knowledge may be and to help eradicate that gap.
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Post-Assessment
– Copy and paste
the post-assessment you plan to use to assess the students’ knowledge of the
topic after implementing the unit lessons. The post-assessment can be the
same as the pre-assessment, a modified version, or something comparable that
measures the same concepts. Include the scoring criteria used to determine
whether the student Exceeds, Meets, Approaches, or Falls Far Below the
learning goal and measurable objectives.
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Identify whether each of
the following is an example of ethos (E), pathos (P), or logos (L).
1. ____ Cigarette smoke contains over 4,800 chemicals, 70
of which are known to cause
cancer - so why would you start smoking?
2. ____ We have been mistreated, abused, and oppressed!
They have benefitted from our suffering and
we must act now!
3. ____ The research, conducted by professors at Harvard
University, suggests that everyone should
learn a second language.
4. ____ Just eat and don’t complain! There are starving
children in Africa who would give anything to
have that plate of food!
5. ____ 9 out of 10 dentists agree that Crest toothpaste is
better at fighting gum disease that other
leading brands.
6. ____ That is not my wallet. My wallet has a hole in it
and that wallet does not, therefore, that cannot
possibly be my wallet.
Select the word with a
stronger connotation.
1. The woman ran her hands over the
_______________ fabric.
a. expensive
b. overpriced
2. Sarah, the ballerina, was tall and
___________.
a. slender
b. skinny
3. The dog’s behavior towards its new
owners was ______________.
a. aggressive
b. unpleasant
4. Brian wanted to turn his car
_____________ into a career.
a. hobby
b. obsession
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STEP
Standard 4 - Unit and Lesson Planning
Note: When implementing the unit
of study, you will be choosing one of these activities to video record, review,
and reflect on your teaching later in the STEP process,
Day 1
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Day 2
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Day 3
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Day 4
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Day 5
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Title
of Lesson or Activity
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Introduction to Rhetorical Devices
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Rhetorical Devices in Obama’s 2009 Inaugural Speech
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Rhetorical Devices in Trump’s 2017 Inaugural Speech
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Rhetorical Devices Comparative Chart
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Review and YouTube Game
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Standards
and Objectives
What do students need to know and be able to do for each day of the
unit?
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Standards:
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.4
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.6 - CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.9-10.3
Objectives:
The students will be able to identify and define the terms ethos, pathos, logo, connotation,
denotation, tone, and voice and
will be able to create examples of ethos, pathos, and logos in persuasive
writing.
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Standards:
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.4
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.6 - CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.9-10.3
Objectives:
The
students will be able to identify and explain examples of ethos, pathos, and
logos as they appear in a presidential speech.
The students will be able to identify examples of words with
positive and negative connotations in a presidential speech and explain how
their connotation impacts the speech.
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Standards:
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.4
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.6 - CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.9-10.3
Objectives:
The
students will be able to identify and explain examples of ethos, pathos, and
logos as they appear in a presidential speech.
The students will be able to identify examples of words with
positive and negative connotations in a presidential speech and explain how
their connotation impacts the speech.
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Standards:
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.4
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.6 - CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.9-10.3
Objectives:
The
students will be able to cite evidence of the use of ethos, pathos, logos,
and positive/negative connotation in a presidential speech.
The students will be able to explain how the use of ethos,
pathos, logos and positive/negative connotative words impacts the overall
message of a piece.
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Standards:
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.4
- CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RI.9-10.6 - CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.9-10.3
Objectives:
The students will be able to identify and explain the
rhetorical device and persuasive technique being used in a commercial
advertisement.
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Academic
Language and Vocabulary
What academic language will you emphasize and teach each day during
this unit?
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Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Connotation
Denotation
Rhetoric
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Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Connotation
Denotation
Rhetoric
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Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Connotation
Denotation
Rhetoric
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Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Connotation
Denotation
Rhetoric
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Ethos
Pathos
Logos
Connotation
Denotation
Rhetoric
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Summary
of Instruction and Activities for the Lesson
How will the instruction and activities flow? Consider how the students
will efficiently transition from one to the next.
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This lesson is
primarily introductory. The teacher will present the Vocabulary PPT one slide
at a time, explaining and expanding on the information as necessary.
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Key vocab:
(Rhetoric, Ethos, Pathos, Logos,
Connotation, Denotation)
During this,
students will take Cornell-style notes. After the PPT is complete, students
will complete the “Summary” part of their Cornell-styles notes.
The teacher will present them with their next task, a
writing exercise that requires them to write rhetorical appeals, presented at
the end of the PPT.
The
teacher will walk the class through one of the situational writing prompts,
giving examples of the rhetorical devices before (the “we do” of I do, we do,
you do), which students will then select and complete.
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Review
of previous day’s vocabulary.
The teacher will
queue the YouTube video of President Barack Obama's 2009 inauguration speech
and will lay the setting for the students.
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He had won
the race against Senator John McCain.
America was during a depression that started in 2008. Lots of people had just
lost their jobs and homes and he campaigned on the idea of hope and change,
promising to improve the economy quickly.
The students
will watch the speech.
After the
speech, the teacher will pass out a hard copy of the speech and will explain
the annotation guidelines.
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Chunk
paragraphs, number the paragraphs, and
summarize in the margins.
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Circle
unfamiliar words
The teacher will circulate the classroom
while students work on annotating their speeches, asking clarifying questions
and ensuring that all students firmly understand what they are analyzing the
speech for.
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Students
will compare/share their summaries.
The
teacher will queue the YouTube video of President Donald Trump’s 2017
inauguration speech and will lay the setting for the students.
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He had won
the race against Hillary Clinton.
America was doing well economically and had seen recent growth and
prosperity, but after years of Republicans and Democrats fighting and
blocking each other in the House and Congress, they didn’t feel like they
were being listened to, represented, or like anything was getting done. Trump
ran on the promise of stopping illegal immigration and refugees, changing the
healthcare system, and cutting taxes.
The students will watch the speech.
After the
speech, the teacher will pass out a hard copy of the speech and will explain
the annotation guidelines.
(See previous).
The teacher will
circulate the classroom while students work on annotating their speeches,
asking clarifying questions and ensuring that all students firmly understand
what they are analyzing the speech for.
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Students
will compare/share their summaries from the Trump speech.
The
teacher will then pass out the “Inaugural Speeches: Comparison Chart” to the students.
Standard
ELA classes (2nd period) will complete the worksheet in their
groups.
Honors
ELA classes (3rd and 4th period) will complete the
worksheet independently.
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The teacher will provide some class time to complete the
comparative chart worksheet for those students who were absent or did not
complete in the allotted time frame (Mentor teacher is generally opposed to
given assignments as homework because of the low completion rate demonstrated
by non-honors students).
Afterwards, teacher will collect the Obama speeches, the
Trump speeches, and the completed worksheets.
Teacher will then pass out the mini whiteboards and the
dry-erase markers and will show the commercials from YouTube one at a time,
allowing time after each for the students to present their answers. Teams
with the highest number correct will receive a prize.
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Differentiation
What are the adaptations or modifications to the instruction/activities
as determined by the student factors or individual learning needs?
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Increased
amount of required work for honors classes.
Standard
(P.2):
Select
one of the situational writing prompts and write one appeal for each ethos,
pathos, and logos – totaling 3 sentences.
Honors
(P.3/4):
Select
two of the situational writing prompts and write one appeal for each ethos,
pathos, and logos – totaling 6 sentences.
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Increased individual work for the honors classes.
Standard (P.2): Read and summarize sections 1 & 2 of the
Obama speech, due for a grade the following day.
Honors (P.3/4):
Read and summarize sections 1-3 of the Obama speech, due for
a grade the following day.
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Increased individual work for the honors classes.
Standard (P.2):
Read and summarize sections 4 & 5 of the Trump speech,
due for a grade the following day.
Honors (P.3/4):
Read and summarize sections 4-6 of the Trump speech, due for
a grade the following day.
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Increased individual work for the honors classes.
Standard (P.2):
Complete the comparative chart worksheet with the help of a
partner, including citations from the texts.
Honors (P.3/4):
Complete the comparative chart worksheet individually,
including citations from the texts.
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Faster speed of gameplay for the honors classes.
Standard (P.2):
Students watch commercial and then have 2 minutes to
deliberate the rhetorical device before announcing their answer.
Honors (P.3/4):
Students watch commercial and then have 1 minute to
deliberate the rhetorical device before announcing their answer.
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Required
Materials, Handouts, Text, Slides, and Technology
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Technology: computer and projector
Slides: Ethos, Pathos, Logos PPT.
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Handouts: A hardcopy version of Obama’s 2009 Inaugural
Address
Technology: computer and projector
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Handouts: A hardcopy version of Trump’s 2017 Inaugural
Address
Technology: computer and projector
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Handouts: Inaugural Speech Comparative Chart worksheet
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Technology: computer and projector
Misc.: Miniature whiteboards and dry-erase markers
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Instructional
and Engagement Strategies
What strategies are you going to use with your students to keep them
engaged throughout the unit of study?
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Interactive questions throughout the PPT.
Activity for students at end of PPT.
Relating the material to the real-world, asking students for
personal examples from their lives.
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Following along with text of speech while
watching/listening.
Stopping during speech to ask about examples of ethos,
pathos, logos, and connotation.
Checking for comprehension frequently.
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Following along with text of speech while
watching/listening.
Stopping during speech to ask about examples of ethos,
pathos, logos, and connotation.
Checking for comprehension frequently.
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Checking comprehension frequently.
Allowing for a variety of grouping with students – some
activities solo, some with groups.
Reviewing terms before beginning to ensure understanding.
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Group and solo work in different classes as well as
different group structures.
Competitive game format with tangible reward encourages
participation.
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How are you going to measure the learning of your students
throughout the lesson?
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Checking to make sure students are following along and
taking notes.
Many slides in the PPT ask for student feedback and
participation, allowing for a chance to see the students working with what
they just learned and seeing it in action.
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Checking for comprehension halfway through the speech.
Allows teacher the chance to see the students examining a
new text for examples of ethos, pathos, and logos.
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Checking for comprehension halfway through the speech.
Allows teacher the chance to see the students examining a
new text for examples of ethos, pathos, and logos.
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Students will independently (honors) or codependently
(standard) work to complete the worksheet, locating examples of ethos,
pathos, logos, and positive/negative connotation in each speech studied this
week.
Teacher will circulate the room during this, asking
questions to assess understanding and helping to clarify any confusion the
students may have.
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Firmly assessing which students, or groups of students, can
effectively identify examples of ethos, pathos, and logos quickly and
efficiently.
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Summative,
Post- Assessment
What post-assessment will measure the learning progress? Note: This can
be the same as the pre-assessment
or a modified version of it.
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Post-assessment will be administered 24 hours after the
lesson has concluded with no review before to ensure that student
understanding and retention is genuine.
Post-assessment includes 6 questions which require the
students to identify if the argument contained within is ethos, pathos, or
logos.
Post-assessment also includes 4 questions which require
student to choose the word with the strongest connotation for the sentence.
While the pre-assessment required students to simply provide
the correct definitions for the terms rhetoric,
ethos, pathos, logos, and
connotation, the post-assessment requires students to apply the knowledge
that they should have gained from studying the terms to correctly identify it
without the use of the definitions at hand.
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STEP Standard 5 - Implementation of Instructional Unit
Summary of Unit Implementation:
Lesson 1: This
lesson consisted of presenting to the classes (three in total) the vocabulary
PPT I had compiled for this unit, including the terms rhetoric, ethos, pathos,
logos, connotation, and denotation. The slideshow included an example/practice
slide for each term and ended with an activity that required students to write
an ethos/pathos/logos appeal for one of the prompts provided. During the slideshow, the students were also
meant to be taking Cornell style notes and they appeared to do this without
issue. The first time I presented, I was nervous and was fumbling over my
words. The activity at the end went relatively well, however, and it seemed
that students were beginning to understand. The second and third time I went
through this activity were better as I was more familiar with the routine and
was comfortable with presenting something large to them.
Lesson 2: This
lesson consisted of reviewing the terms learned the day before and then
watching President Obama’s 2009 inaugural speech, stopping to identify examples
of ethos/pathos/logos and positive/negative connotation, and then summarizing
2-3 sections of the speech. This went well. The first class being the standard
ELA class struggled to identify examples of ethos/pathos/logos but the second appeared to have
better luck. They were then set to number the paragraphs and section them off
according to my directions. This also went well. Students were then allowed
about 15 minutes of class time to re-read and summarize those sections while
circling any words they were not familiar with; anything they didn’t finish in
class was due the following day as homework. While this should seem like plenty
of time, many did not make a genuine effort.
Lesson 3: Lesson 3 began with sharing the
summaries they created for lesson 2 and then jumping into the same activity as
Lesson 2 but using President Trump’s 2017 inaugural speech for comparison.
Again, we stopped to identify examples of ethos/pathos/logos and
positive/negative connotations. Again, they numbered paragraphs and sectioned
the paper according to directions, working to summarize 2-3 sections and circle
unfamiliar words. As before, the work they did not finish in class was due the
following class as homework.
Lesson 4: Lesson 4 began with sharing the
summaries that they completed from the Trump speech. The next activity was a
worksheet that required students to compare the two inaugural speeches,
locating examples of ethos, pathos, and logos from each as well as identifying many
positive and negative connotative words. The standard class could work in
groups – a choice later regretted – and the honors course was required to
complete the worksheet individually.
Lesson 5: This lesson served as the
culmination for the unit and would be the final time that students were able to
practice identifying examples of ethos/pathos/logos before they were given the
post-assessment. For this lesson, the students shared some of what they had
written on their comparative worksheets and then the class moved into a “game”
where the objective was to identify the ethos/pathos/logos used in the
commercial they were shown. The first time through was difficult. This class
has a difficult time taking any tasks seriously and they were rowdy and
obnoxious to the point that we cut the activity short and they received a stern
talking-to about behavior. Because of this we made some changes for the Honors
courses, also requiring them to explain why it was as they stated and working
in smaller groups and these changes greatly improved the experience of the game
for all students involved.
Summary of Student Learning:
My initial
perception of student learning was that they had made progress since they were given
the pre-assessment. However, this was simply a perception of growth as it was
obvious that they had not achieved mastery yet. My mentor teacher and I were
tempted to postpone the post-assessment until after they had further review and
more practice with application but understood that the post-assessment was due
at a particular time in order to complete my own homework. With that in mind,
we moved forward.
The results
were as we expected; there was improvement but there was not mastery. Of three
9th grade classes, totaling about 85 students, only 3 students were
able to earn a 100% on the test while most averaged about 70%. The students had
the opportunity to earn a few points of extra credit on the test by defining
ethos, pathos, and logos on the back. Even the students who clearly understood
the definitions struggled with application.
There are
two specific students that I can think of that had an impact on the way I was
teaching the material and how I was helping those students who needed an
increased amount of assistance with the material. One, Darion, made a
connection early on during the vocabulary term slideshow before I had even
reached the portion where we would go the examples. While discussing how Pathos
is an appeal to emotion and an attempt to sway the audience using emotional or
graphic images that cause the audience to feel something, Darion raised his
hand and asked, “Like those sad animal commercials?”. I was so excited and
praised his connection before asking the class if they could think of any other
examples. There were a few. It was because of this that I asked the other class
directly during this portion if they could think of any examples they had seen
recently and another student again mentioned the ‘sad animal commercials’.
The second
student, was one who either wasn’t giving applying the information they had
learned a genuine effort or who genuinely did not understand, it was difficult
to tell because she broached the subject in such a flippant way by saying “I
just don’t get this,” as approached their table while circulating the room. I
asked her specifically what she didn’t understand and then attempted to
re-explain it first by reminding her to check her notes and then by providing
some of the examples we had already seen in class. She continued to react
flippantly to the information so I approached it a different way. “Let’s say
you’re on the market to buy a new car. What would it take to persuade you that
a car was the one you wanted to buy?”. She answered the questions and I explained
that that was what they should be looking for – but in terms of “What makes me
want this guy to be my president? What is he doing to convince me that I want
him to be my president?”. She seemed to accept what I had said, so I asked if
she wanted another example or if she thought she understood it. She said she
did so I went on my way. After this encounter, this was the example I used with
any students to help clear up any confusion.
STEP
Standard 6 - Analysis of Student Learning
Post-Test Data:
Whole Class - Once you have assessed your
students’ learning on the topic, collect and analyze the post-test data to
determine the effectiveness of your instruction and assessment.
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Number
of Students
Pre-Test
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Number
of Students
Post-Test
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Exceeds
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Was not assessed
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Was not assessed
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Meets
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All
three classes:
Met
Expectations
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Ethos: 16/70
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Pathos: 28/70
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Logos: 30/70
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Connotation: 26/70
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Rhetoric: 43/70
Average:
27 students/70
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All three classes:
Met expectations
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Ethos: 45/70
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Pathos: 58/70
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Logos: 54/70
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Connotation: 37/70
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Rhetoric: not assessed
Average: 49 students/70
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Approaches
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Was not assessed
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Was not assessed
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Falls Far Below
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All three classes:
Falls Far Below
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Ethos: 54/70
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Pathos: 42/70
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Logos: 40/70
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Connotation: 44/70
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Rhetoric: 27/70
Average: 43 students/70
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All three classes:
Falls Far Below:
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Ethos: 25/70
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Pathos: 12/70
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Logos: 16/70
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Connotation: 33/70
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Rhetoric: not assessed
Average: 21 students/70
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Post-Test Analysis: Whole Class
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Based
on my analysis of the whole-class post-assessment data from this unit, I
would say that it was moderately successful but that it was not as effective
as it could have been to reach all students. Students struggled with some
parts of the material but not others. In particular, they struggled to
correctly identify “ethos” and they struggled with correctly identifying
words with the stronger positive/negative connotation. Comparing the number
of students who fell far below expectations from pre-test to post-test,
however, shows that there are a good number of students who benefitted from
the lesson unit. Whether they can maintain that understanding and later
demonstrate application is still yet to be seen, however.
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Based
on the analysis of the whole-class post-assessment data when compared to the
whole-class pre-assessment data, it appears that while my instructional
methodologies were successful to a point, they were not as successful as they
could have been and simply did not serve to meet all students and help them
grow. Students continued to struggle with the idea of ethos and how it was
used and identified in rhetorical works. Students also struggled to grasp the
full nuance of how connotation plays into building an argument. This is
likely because there was no specific and direct drill suing this concept.
Further practice will be required to achieve mastery of those skills as
students will need to demonstrate them in an upcoming unit that requires them
to build an argumentative essay from the ground up. I believe that the
majority of the fault in not achieving completely met expectations lies in
the level of interest that students took in the material being examined. It
seems like no exaggeration to say that most students will not take an
outright interest in the presidential inauguration speeches of years gone by.
Also tied into this could be that there was a two day period where students
did little to apply their previously gained knowledge of ethos/pathos/logos
in a practical way. This was remedied by compiling the data from the
post-assessment and providing a more-engaging extension activity following
the post-assessemtn.
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Post-Assessment Analysis:
Subgroup Selection
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For
this subgroup post-assessment data analysis, I chose to focus on the Gifted
and Talented students. This the largest subgroup of students in my classroom
and their Gifted nature ranges from mathematics specialization to
reading/writing. I have found myself questioning before if these students are
being adequately challenged in this classroom, in this school, and in this
district in general as it tends to be the district’s policy to cater to the
‘lowest denominator’ in order to raise test scores and I feel this leaves
those particularly adept students wanting more challenging material to ensure
they are meeting their fullest potential.
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Post-Assessment Data: Subgroup (Gender,
ELL population, Gifted, students on IEPs or 504s, etc.)
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Number
of Students
Pre-Test
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Number
of Students
Post-Test
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Exceeds
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Was not assessed
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Was not assessed
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Meets
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While student-specific data was not
collected for this class, the general number of students who met expectations
was lower than the overall number of Gifted students in each the 3rd
and 4th Honors classes.
This leads me to conclude that only about 5
of the 23 Gifted students in these two classes already demonstrated an
understanding of the material.
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Gifted Student
Subgroup:
Met
expectations
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Ethos:
15/23
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Pathos:
21/23
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Logos:
18/23
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Connotation:
14/23
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Rhetoric:
not assessed
Average:
17/23 met expectations
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Approaches
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Was not assessed
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Was not assessed
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Falls Far Below
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See above “meets” box detailing how
individual student data was not collected.
The clear majority of students did not yet
demonstrate any level of mastery of these topics. An estimated 18/23 students
fell far below pre-determined measures of success on this pre-test.
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Gifted Student
Subgroup:
Falls far below
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Ethos:
8/23
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Pathos:
2/23
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Logos:
5/23
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Connotation:
7/23
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Rhetoric:
not assessed
Average: 6/23
fall far below
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Post-Assessment
Analysis: Subgroup
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Perhaps unsurprisingly, considered their
status as Gifted, this subgroup of students consistently demonstrates a
deeper level of understanding and higher level of mastery over the assigned
content than non-Gifted students. While this may be due to their over-all
higher level of competency in the realm of academia, it may also be due to
internal factors like intrinsic motivation and a willingness and eagerness to
study and absorb new information that non-Gifted students often seem to lack.
Overall, for this group the unit was more efficient at teaching them the
necessary material than it was for standard non-Gifted students.
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While most of the students in this
subgroup demonstrated mastery over the content, there were a number who
failed to do so. I attribute this to the fact that the district does not
label all Gifted students the same way. While they all receive the general
“Gifted” label, they all have areas of emphasis where their skills are
particularly advanced. This appears to have been the case with my Gifted
students as, while they are all placed in an Honors level ELA course, some of
them are qualified Gifted in the realm of mathematics or science while some
are labeled Gifted for reading/writing/speaking. This, I believe, explains
the minor discrepancies in failing to meet expectations. As with the majority
group, this group failed to fully grasp the concept of “ethos” and they
require a good deal more experience with connotation. These are both easy to
explain and match up relatively well with the general whole-class data.
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Post-Assessment Data: Remainder
of Class
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Number of Students
Pre-Test
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Number of Students
Post-Test
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Exceeds
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Was not assessed
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Was not assessed
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Meets
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Assuming that about 5 of the 23 Gifted
students met expectations, then the remaining numbers would be 22/47 non-GT
students who met expectations.
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Non-GT
Met
expectations:
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Ethos:
30/47
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Pathos:
37/47
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Logos:
35/47
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Connotation:
23/47
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Rhetoric:
not assessed
Average: 32/47
meet expectations
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Approaches
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Was not assessed
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Was not assessed
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Falls Far Below
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Assuming that 18/23 GT students falls far
below expectations and the remaining number of students is 47, then 29/47
students fell far below expectations.
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Non-GT
Falls Far
Below:
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Ethos:
17/47
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Pathos:
10/47
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Logos:
12/47
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Connotation:
24/47
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Rhetoric:
not assessed
Average: 15/47
fall far below
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Post-Assessment
Analysis: Subgroup and Remainder of Class
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Comparing the data from the Gifted and
Talented student subgroup post-assessment with the data from the Non-Gifted
and Talented student group’s post-assessment data, it is apparent that the
instructional materials provided for this unit and the instructional
techniques used within this unit were adequate for most students but failed
to reach all of them. It is also apparent that the Gifted and Talented
student subgroup was already more adept and prepared to accept and utilize
this information than the Non-GT student group. As explained above, this
could be due to a number of reasons including intrinsic motivation to learn and
succeed academically and a generally higher level of academic skills. The
unit required that students were able to read, comprehend, synthesize
information, and to determine the rhetorical devices being used in two
different presidential inaugural speeches. If students entered this lesson
with an already-low reading skill set and a low-level ability to read and
synthesize informational texts, they would already be at a disadvantage when
compared to their averagely skilled peers. Here, again, we see the age-old
dilemma; do we, as educators, cater to the ‘lowest denominator’ and fail to
adequately challenge those who are academically advanced or do we provide
rigorous content for those who are advanced and risk leaving behind those who
are not?
Overall, this unit felt generally
successful and the extension activities that were planned following the
post-assessment results appear to have already increased the students’
understanding of the rhetorical devices and how they are best used.
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After analyzing the post-assessment data
with my mentor teacher, we were in concurrence that the students – all groups
– required more familiarity with the concepts in ethos/pathos/logos,
especially considering the looming 9th grade argumentative
research essay wherein they would need to demonstrate control of persuasive
techniques. We planned another, larger activity that was designed to allow
students to engage in a possibly-familiar topic while applying their new
academic knowledge to the topic to persuade their classmates. The students
were to work in groups to create an advertisement for a superhero that was
assigned to them in the hopes that they would persuade their classmates to
vote for their hero to be the savior of the world. As of this moment in time,
that activity has concluded as well and it generally appears that students
have a better understanding of ethos/pathos/logos. For the time being, we are
moving on because we need to introduce the essay unit but we will circle back
to the rhetorical devices in about two weeks when we review them and discuss
how they can best implement them into their own argumentative papers.
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STEP Standard 7 – Reflecting on Instruction
to Improve Student Progress
Improved Practice
Based on the Unit of Study
Based
on the experience of developing and delivering your instructional unit, list
three short-term goals to improve specific areas of your teaching practice
based on the unit of instruction and describe your plan to reach each short-term
goal.
Short-Term Goal
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Plan to Reach
the Goal (i.e.,
professional development, research on the Internet, observation of a veteran
teacher, etc.)
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1. To
develop a more advanced level of classroom management skills.
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·
Gaining feedback from my mentor teacher about
my current management skills and what she would recommend to improve them.
·
Internet research to identify a number of
common classroom management techniques that do and do not work.
·
Keeping in mind that because the students
still do not fully see my mentor teacher’s classroom as my classroom that I
will likely not be able to achieve full management with them but that this is
a learning experience and that I shouldn’t take any failures as a personal
slight to my management skills but should instead take it into account when
preparing for managing my own classroom in the coming school year.
·
Reading “Classroom Management that Works:
Research-based Strategies for Every Teacher” by Robert J. Marzano
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2. To
stop more frequently to check for comprehension and do on-the-spot
reteaching.
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·
To be more aware of when my students are
lacking in knowledge by asking questions throughout that are meant to gauge
how much of the presented information they are grasping.
·
To take continued feedback from my mentor
teacher about when the speed of the lesson is too quick and when it is too
slow.
·
Internet research based around identifying a
number of strategies that could be easily implemented into the classroom to
gauge student understanding.
·
To provide a greater number of
post-assessments to ensure that learning goals have been met for every
lesson.
·
To implement an “exit ticket” or
Demonstration of Learning (DOL) system that will require students to turn in
a small thing at the end of every class that is meant to serve as data
showing whether or not they fully grasped the information.
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3. Create
more engaging activities that students want to complete
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·
Examine internet resources for ideas about
topics that engage students.
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Examine internet resources for ideas about
how to engage students with topics that may not immediately interest them.
·
Take suggestions from other teachers about
what activities got their students involved and which ones fell flat.
·
Remember that it will be impossible to create
an activity that absolutely engages every single student because they are all
individuals with widely varied interests, but with the right level of
modernity and application to the real-world, it is possible to engage the
majority.
·
When designing units, question “How can I
help my students better relate to this material? How can I get them to care
about this?”
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References
Demographics
2016-2017. (n.d.). Pueblo City Schools. Retrieved January 20,
2018, from http://www.pueblocityschools.us/about-pueblo-city-schools/demographics
Pueblo,
Colorado. City-Data. (n.d.). Retrieved January 20, 2018, from
http://www.city-data.com/city/Pueblo-Colorado.html
Roper, P. (2017, May
23). More than 40 Percent of Pueblo County Residents Use Medicaid. The
Pueblo Chieftain. Retrieved January 20, 2018, from
https://www.chieftain.com/news/pueblo/more-than-percent-of-pueblo-county-residents-use-medicaid/article_90f1268c-3adc-5078-b7fb-f7e2d9060ec3.html
STEP Template 2 - March 4, 2018-April 27, 2018
STEP Standard
1 - Contextual Factors: Knowing Your School and Community
Part I: Community, District, School, and Classroom
Factors
A. Geographic Location
Pueblo,
Colorado, is the 9th largest town, by population, in the state. The
town itself rests about two hours South of Denver and is situated in the
Arkansas River Valley, making it perfect for its widespread agriculture. As of
2016, the total population of the city was 110,295 (this includes only proper
city limits and does not account for the Suburb of Pueblo West outside of city
limits but within commute distance). Also, as of 2016, the 52.6% of the
population was Hispanic, 42.2% white, 2.1% African American, and 3.1% of the
population identified as multi-racial, Indian America, Asian, or Native
Hawaiian or Pacific Islander. The median income in Pueblo, Colorado, was
$38,380 compared to the state median of $65, 685 and the median rental home
cost $787 as of 2016 (Pueblo, Colorado, n.d.). In general, the area is
considered low-income, especially when compared to areas like Denver; about 41%
of all Pueblo County residents qualify financially to receive government
assistance in healthcare (Roper, 2017).
B. District Demographics
Compared to
other districts within the state, Pueblo City Schools District 60 (a
conglomeration of two earlier districts in 1946) is considered to have a
diversified student population, the majority of which is comprised of minority
ethnicities in the United States. 70.1% of the entire student population across
the 31 schools are of Hispanic ethnicity, 25.2% is white, and the remaining
4.7% is African American, Native American Indian, Native Hawaiian or Pacific
Islander, Asian, or multi-racial. Of the 31 schools, four are high schools, two
are k-8, one is 4-8, four are middle schools, 18 are elementary schools, and
two are charter-magnet schools.
The district
has faced a good amount of difficulty with funding and performance ratings in
the last few decades and were – at one point – facing intervention from the
Colorado Board of Education if they could not beat the “turn-around” clock.
Just this week, it was announced that many of the schools has passed recent
reviews and the district could present its “turn-around” and performance
improvement plan to the Colorado Board of Education in Denver. However, funding
issues still loom and teacher contract negotiations have left many feeling
frustrated and unappreciated. The solution at the start of the school year left
many teachers extremely displeased and many still consider strike and walk-outs
to be a valid future option.
The district
is largely a Title One district, provides most of its students with free
breakfast and lunch daily, and the fundraising attempts appear to be endless. Per-pupil
revenue amounts to $7,550.73 per student, per year. The ESL/ELL students
comprise 8.2% of the total student population, Gifted and Talented create 3.2%,
and 7.1% of the student population registered as homeless (this could be due to
the large migrant farm workers that move through the area every year)
(Demographics 2016-2017, n.d.). While the district has made large improvements
recently, it still has a long way to go as it still chronically underperforms
compared to the rest of the state.
C. School Demographics
East High
School was opened in 1959 to serve two newer and growing neighborhoods on
Pueblo’s North-East side. It is one of four public high schools operated by the
district and is the only D60 high school to integrate the International
Baccalaureate program (Middle Years Programme for grades 9 and 10 since 2011
and the Diploma Programme for grades 11 and 12 since 1996). East’s total
student population has decreased in recent years and throughout the school year,
even, dropping from about 1,200 at the beginning of the 2017-2018 school year
to 1,046 by January 2018. The reason for this appears to be the increased
awareness of at-home online schooling opportunities. As many of these students
come from impoverished families, many of them also hold jobs to help support
their families and the online school opportunity works better for those
students than a regular school day would. However, the school does expect to
see a small student population jump during the start of the next semester.
Of the 1,046-total
student population, they maintain a 51% Male and 49% female population. Like
the district demographics, most of the student population is Hispanic, totaling
73%, 21% white and the remaining 6% are comprised of African America, Native
American Indian, Native Hawaiian or Pacific Islander, Asian, or multi-racial
students. The average ACT score for the school was 18.1, lower than the state
average, in the 2016 school year and since then, the district has moved away from
the ACT and towards implementing a series of tests designed to help students
prepare for the SAT. The school is administering the PSAT test next week and
the results from that should be available in two or so weeks. The first PSAT
administered in September showed promising results indicating improvement
across the board for East, particularly in the Honors level courses and showed
that East was several points ahead of the other three district high schools.
However, even with this improvement, East still has miles of improvement ahead
of them before they can hope to compete with the state averages.
Of the
classes that I am directly involved with, 4 of the 5 are Honors level courses.
Because of this, there tends to be a slightly higher population of female students
than male. students in my classes and the number of Gifted and Talented
students within my classes is higher than it is throughout the district.
However, of the three 9th grade classes that I will be teaching my
unit to, only two are honors. This means that I may have to accommodate the
level of instruction or the time spent working towards understanding the
concepts when I teach it to the first set of 9th graders, of whom
none are Gifted and Talented and two of them are current ELL, having not yet
exited the program while another two are also on IEPs and one of them has
unlabeled behavioral issues.
STEP Standard 1 - Contextual Factors: Knowing Your School
and Community
Part II: Demographic,
Environment, and Academic Factors
A.
Student Demographic Factors
The
demographic information for the students that I encounter daily closely mirrors
the demographic information of the district and the school in general with a
few exceptions. I work with 5 total different ELA classes, two 10th
grade Honors ELA and two 9th grade Honors ELA as well as one
standard level 9th grade ELA class. Ages range from 13-16. Between
all five classes, there is a 41% male population and a 59% female population
(125-total students, 51 males, 74 female); this seems to be indicative of an
overall trend with Honors and advanced classes across the United States.
Backing this up is that the only one of the 5 classes with a gender split that
does not favor female students is the standard 9th grade ELA where
there is an even 50-50 split. Of these students, the ethnicity split is much
the same as the general school demographics – a majority are Hispanic, a
smaller percentage is white, and an even smaller percentage is African American
and Asian. Within my classes, there are no Native Hawaiian/Pacific Islander or
Native American Indian students. Their socioeconomic information is also
representative of the schools’; they all receive free breakfast and lunch daily
and many do not have the money to buy a complete set of school supplies at the
start of the school year.
B.
Environmental Factors
The physical
classroom is large enough to comfortably seat 36 students though the largest
class size is only 29. The desks are small tables and are arranged in 9 groups
of 4 each, with groups of 3-4 students facing each other in a square. There is
a space for the teacher at the front of the room and her desk and auxiliary
tables are in the back of the room. The front wall of the classroom is all one
long whiteboard and a projector hangs from the ceiling at the back of the room,
set up to project on a smart board that was installed and then promptly
forgotten when the projector was installed. The teacher has given me my own
space at the front of the room, in an empty corner, next to a filing cabinet. A
large closet-like cabinet is at the back of the room that contains some novels,
less used materials, cleaning supplies, and other miscellaneous items. Another
cabinet contains frequently used worksheets, and book shelf at the front of the
room holds a complete class set of textbooks – two different set of literature
books, one for 9th grade and one for 10th, as well as a
class set of grammar books for 9th and 10th grade. The
books have been in use for the district for at least 20 years and are – largely
– outdated, though the materials contained within them are still teachable. The
classroom has two doors – one that leads to the main hallway and another that
leads to the “media center” where there are study tables and a class set of
computers. East High School does not have a traditional library.
Technology
can be reserved for a class several weeks ahead of time – though reservations
go quickly – and there are only so many carts available. Each cart contains a
class set of laptops and the students know their computer login information.
The ELA department has been fighting to make sure that a cart of laptops is
available exclusively for the ELA department since they make such frequent use
of them. Thus far, the district has been uncooperative. The laptops are
frequently used for testing and typing in the ELA department and having them
unavailable can hinder the progress of the class in producing typed materials
(which are infinitely easier for teachers to grade as they remove the hassle of
deciphering student handwriting).
Parental
involvement appears typical. The concerned parents reach out and try while
others appear content to let the student handle their education independently
and others seem to care very little or to simply not value education. A few
examples immediately come to mind; one morning, a parent called the classroom
to confirm that the teacher had received the money necessary to purchase the
novel needed for class, another immediately texted a student who was
accidentally marked absent, another called at the beginning of the school year
to demand to know why classic novels like
Moby Dick and Les Miserable
weren’t being taught, and another – disappointingly – has decided that since
his wife left him, his oldest daughter will be in charge of her 4 younger
siblings despite her poor health, making it nearly impossible for her to
actually attend class. Despite this, it seems to be a balanced mix and it seems
that most parents allow their high schoolers the autonomy you would expect at
that age and grade level.
C.
Student Academic Factors
Student Subgroup
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ELL
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IEP
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Section 504
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Gifted
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Other Services (Explain)
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Behavior or Cognitive Needs Receiving No
Services
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Boys
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4
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2
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0
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12
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0
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0
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Girls
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6
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1
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1
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11
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0
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0
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Instructional Accommodations and Modifications
(Describe any instructional accommodations
and modifications regularly used to meet the needs of students in each
subgroup.)
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When students complete their vocab words, they
include an illustration that helps them retain the meaning of the word. This
is commonly employed with ESL students as a memory device.
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Adhering to the student’s IEP plan is the best
choice for these students. Allowing them extra time to complete work or to
take tests is frequently employed for them.
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The one student that has a 504 in place does not
frequently attend class, likely because of her health issues, but her 504
dictates that she is allowed extra time to complete all assignment and tests.
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All the G/T students are in Honors courses and so
their coursework is already more challenging than it would be in a standard
class. On top of this they also have an increased number of vocabulary words.
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Text
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Text
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In
the space below, discuss the possible affect these characteristics could have
on the planning, delivery, and assessment of your unit. Refrain from using
student names.
The classes
that I will be teaching this unit to include both 9th grade Honors ELA and the
9th grade standard ELA. Ultimately, this include all three IEP
students, 5 ESL students, and 10 Gifted/Talented students. The majority of the
IEP and ESL students are all in one class – the standard 9th grade
ELA class. To accommodate these students, I will have to closely monitor their
understanding of the topic through frequent formative assessment questions,
asked to reveal to me their understanding and to help them clarify their own. I
will also need to allow the IEP students to possibly have more time or to offer
to work with them during one of our planning periods later in the day to help
them fully understand the material.
Other
options for aiding in the IEP students understanding is to group them with
other students who have shown understanding of the topic – this would be easily
enough accomplished as I already plan on having the students work in groups to
complete the assignment. To help the ESL students, I plan on providing the key
vocabulary words ahead of time, allowing them time to define and study the
meaning of those terms beforehand and by providing ample explanation of the
meaning as well as the application of those terms. Also included in the lesson
will be a good number of examples of the terms in action. I will also be
presenting a YouTube video that explains the terms and presents examples while
also providing visual memory cues. After the completion of the project, the
exemplary examples of the assignments will be posted on the classroom walls to
serve as a visual reminder of the terms and their uses.
To provide a
higher level of challenge for the Honors/Gifted and Talented students that the
standard 9th grade ELA class will not require, I will be including
some restrictions on their options for completing the project and may include a
secondary assignment asking them to make use of the literary devices we are
studying. Also, the Honors class will need to know and understand these
literary devices to make use of them on the SAT later in the year and in
upcoming unit tests and written assignments, particularly during the
‘argumentative essay unit’.
STEP Standard 2 - Writing Standards-Based Objectives
and the Learning Goal
Unit Topic: Poetry Appreciation, Analysis, Interpretation
Unit Title: Poetry: Art as Communication
National or State Academic Content Standards
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.9-10.2
Determine a theme or central idea of a text and analyze in detail its development over the course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details; provide an objective summary of the text.
Determine a theme or central idea of a text and analyze in detail its development over the course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details; provide an objective summary of the text.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.9-10.4
Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone (e.g., how the language evokes a sense of time and place; how it sets a formal or informal tone).
Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone (e.g., how the language evokes a sense of time and place; how it sets a formal or informal tone).
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.9-10.10
By the end of grade 9, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and poems, in the grades 9-10 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range. By the end of grade 10, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and poems, at the high end of the grades 9-10 text complexity band independently and proficiently.
By the end of grade 9, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and poems, in the grades 9-10 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range. By the end of grade 10, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and poems, at the high end of the grades 9-10 text complexity band independently and proficiently.
Learning Goal: For
students to have a deeper understanding of a poem through analysis of meaning,
theme, and figurative language.
Measurable Objectives:
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Students will be
able to independently analyze and interpret a poem by Maya Angelou by
completing the Poetry ID Card worksheet designed by the teacher.
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Students will be
able to analyze and interpret a number of poetic works from a variety of poets
(including Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Tupac Shakur, William Shakespeare,
Alfred Lord Tennyson, John McCrae, and Rupi Kuar) by completing a range of
poetry activities including a Poetry ID Card, a TPCASTT Analysis, a round-robin
discussion, a gallery walk, and figurative language interactive notebook
manipulatives.
STEP Standard 3 - Assessment and Data Literacy
Pre-Assessment - Copy and paste the pre-assessment
you plan to use to assess the students’ knowledge of the topic prior to
implementing the unit lessons. Include the scoring criteria used to determine
whether the student Exceeds, Meets, Approaches, or Falls Far Below the
learning goal and measurable objectives.
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The Kraken
Alfred Lord Tennyson, 1809 - 1892
Below
the thunders of the upper deep,
Far, far beneath in the abysmal sea, His ancient, dreamless, uninvaded sleep The Kraken sleepeth: faintest sunlights flee About his shadowy sides; above him swell Huge sponges of millennial growth and height; And far away into the sickly light, From many a wondrous grot and secret cell Unnumbered and enormous polypi Winnow with giant arms the slumbering green. There hath he lain for ages, and will lie Battening upon huge sea worms in his sleep, Until the latter fire shall heat the deep; Then once by man and angels to be seen, In roaring he shall rise and on the surface die.
In worksheet form:
TPCASTT Analysis
TITLE: Consider the title and
make a prediction about what the poem is about.
PARAPHRASE: Translate the
poem line by line into your own words on a literal level. Look for complete
thoughts (sentences may be inverted) and look up unfamiliar words.
CONNOTATION: Examine the poem
for meaning beyond the literal. Look for figurative language, imagery, and
sound elements.
ATTITUDE/TONE: Notice the
speaker’s tone and attitude. Humor? Sarcasm? Awe?
SHIFTS: Note any shifts or
changes in speaker or attitude. Look for key words, time change, punctuation.
TITLE: Examine the title
again, this time on an interpretive level.
THEME: Briefly state in your
own words what the poem is about (subject), then what the poet is saying
about the subject (theme).
Students had been given a
presentation regarding the types of figurative language before this unit and
had access to those notes while completing the worksheet. The worksheet was
meant to gauge how well they tackled and older and more formal tone in poetry
and how deeply they tackled the ‘interpretive” aspect of poetry analysis. The
worksheet was gone over before they started it and they had access to the
poem above (“The Kraken” by Alfred, Lord Tennyson) during.
Grading criteria:
5 possible points for each
section.
Must be complete thoughts and
sentences – must demonstrate genuine effort and attempt at analysis. While
some are more personal and free-response, others have a set answer for being
correct – how correct those things are will determine how many of the 5
possible points they receive.
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Pre-Assessment
Data: Whole Class - Once you have assessed your students’ knowledge on
the topic, collect and analyze the pre-assessment data to determine if you
will need to modify the standards, learning goal, or measurable objectives
that will be addressed during instruction.
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Number of Students
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Exceeds
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3/50
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Meets
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13/50
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Approaches
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29/50
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Falls Far Below
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5/50
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Pre-Assessment Analysis: Whole
Class
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Based on the data above, there are
few changes I would make. It is obvious that there are many students who have
already encountered poetry analysis and figurative language at least to the
level that it was assessed on or that have already gained a surprising amount
of insight from our introduction to poetry and figurative language. However,
there are even more students – the majority, in fact – that needs further
instruction in figurative language and analysis techniques. They struggle to
look at a poem and identify aspects on figurative language used without being
told specifically which aspect to look for; this is something that I have
noticed during out classroom discussions regarding poetry. The other
challenge is to get them thinking on a deeper level and considering the
author’s purpose and intent when analyzing. The standards remain the same and
the learning objectives remain the same but the things that I place emphasis
on are now slightly altered.
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After
examining the data above, it appears that the wisest course of action would
be to integrate an increased amount of analysis that focuses on the author’s
intent and purpose. While many of my students met or exceeded expectations,
ever more fell into the ‘approaching’ category and this was due mainly to
their evident lack of skill in interpreting a poem from the author’s
perspective or on a level deeper than surface. This will likely require that
I model the action before they attempt to complete it or that I explain the
importance of understanding the author’s intent and purpose
As far as
figurative language goes, I will need to slightly alter the focus as well. At
the moment, the students are familiar enough with the terms that many of them
can identify the terms when called on to do so thought finding examples in a
text would present a challenge. Essentially, what they lack is the ability to
apply that information. They will get the chance to do that in-class as they
read a number of poems that require them to identify certain aspects of
figurative language and to write a number of poems that incorporate various
forms of figurative language.
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Post-Assessment
– Copy and paste
the post-assessment you plan to use to assess the students’ knowledge of the
topic after implementing the unit lessons. The post-assessment can be the
same as the pre-assessment, a modified version, or something comparable that
measures the same concepts. Include the scoring criteria used to determine
whether the student Exceeds, Meets, Approaches, or Falls Far Below the
learning goal and measurable objectives.
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The post-assessment given for
this unit will be the EUA given for the entire unit. It consists of approximately
25 different questions asking the students to analyze and compare two
different pomes on the same subject matter.
The first poem is John
McCrae’s “In Flanders Fields” and the second is Sara Teasdale’s “Spring in
War-Time” – both poems are written about the dead and the aftermath of World
War One but treat the subject matter differently. The multiple-choice
questions ask students to answer how they are similar and how they are
different by comparing theme, figurative language use, and perspective within
the poem. Other questions include the identification of author’s intent in
writing, author’s purpose, author’s inspiration, alliteration,
personification, metaphor, and rhyme.
I have not included the test
here because the version that we will use has not yet been finalized by the
ELA department at East; so far only content has been agreed upon and the
questions will be written in the next week.
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STEP
Standard 4 - Unit and Lesson Planning
Note: When implementing
the unit of study, you will be choosing one of these activities to video
record, review, and reflect on your teaching later in the STEP process,
Day 1
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Day 2
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Day 3
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Day 4
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Day 5
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Title of Lesson or Activity
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“In Flanders
Fields” and Poem ID Card
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Free Verse Poetry
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“Caged Bird” – Class analysis
and annotation
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Blackout Poetry
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Emily Dickinson Gallery Walk
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Standards and Objectives
What do students need to know and
be able to do for each day of the unit?
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Standards:
Objectives:
Students will be able to
identify and explain all the necessary technical aspects of poetry and
analyze a poem.
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Objectives:
Students
will be able to define and create free verse poems.
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Objectives: Students will be able to analyze symbolism in a poem and analyze how symbol and theme interact throughout a poem. |
Standards: CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.9-10.4
Objectives:
Students will be able to define blackout poetry and explain its characteristics and to create their own blackout poems. |
Objectives: Students will be able to identify and explain all necessary technical aspects of a poem and to identify the characteristics of Emily Dickinson’s poems. |
Academic Language and Vocabulary
What academic language will you emphasize
and teach each day during this unit?
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Theme
Topic
Rhyme
Meter
Connotation
Denotation
Symbolism
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Free Verse
Rhyme
Meter
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Author’s Purpose
Theme
Symbolism
Personification
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Topic
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Theme
Meter
Rhyme
Personification
Hyperbole
Alliteration
Allusion
Author’s Purpose
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Summary of Instruction and Activities for the Lesson
How will the instruction and
activities flow? Consider how the students will efficiently transition from
one to the next.
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-Students will locate their
textbooks and then use their glossary to locate the poem “In Flanders Fields”
by John McCrae.
-The teacher
will provide some background information on the poet.
-One student
will give a dramatic reading of the poem and then the class will discuss
meaning and content.
-Teacher
will reveal when the poem was written and why and then pass out the Poem ID
Card sheets.
-Class will
discuss the sheets, teacher will identify which parts are not applicable for
this poem and will explain anything that is confusing or that has not been
explicitly covered already.
-Students
then work together with their tables to complete the sheet by the end of
class.
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-Four volunteer students will
read a different free verse poem by one of the poets mentioned above.
-After hearing them, students
will discuss what each has (or does not have) in common.
-Teacher will introduce the
idea of free verse poetry and then introduce the requirement for their
assignment
-Students will work the rest
of class to complete this poetry assignment.
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-Student will give dramatic
reading of the poem.
-Class will discuss meaning
and interesting points of note upon first reading.
-Students will then be given
list of things that should be annotated on their poems.
-Students will discuss after
annotating
-After discussion, students
will be presented with prompt and will answer the writing prompt on the
board”; “What is the symbolism in this poem? Why did Angelou choose that
poem? What is the theme? Would any other symbol work just as well through
this theme? Explain.” Students will have what remains of the class to
respond.
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-The teacher will show
students examples of blackout poetry, with an emphasis on what would or would
not be okay in their own
-Teacher explains the process
for creating
Students collect the supplies
they need and begin creating.
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Students move in groups of
four moving from one table to the next, completing the task assigned to each
poem before moving onto the next at the teacher’s command.
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Differentiation
What are the adaptations or
modifications to the instruction/activities as determined by the student
factors or individual learning needs?
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Students will be able to work
with students, providing a hands-on assistant.
Students may use their poetry
notes which includes information for each task.
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Student may need more help to
begin wiritng.
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Student may receive access
from teacher or from tablemate for this lesson, looking at their notes for
information.
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Students will ask clarifying
questions as necessary.
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Students will be working in
groups and will have that built-in assistance in completing the sheet and
teacher will be ready to answer questions as necessary.
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Required Materials, Handouts, Text, Slides, and Technology
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Text:
“In Flanders Fields” by John McCrae (in textbook)
Handouts:
“Poem ID Card” Worksheet
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Text: Examples of Free Verse
poetry
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Rupi Kaur “i
want to apologize to all the women i have called pretty”
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Stephen Crane
“The Wayfarer”
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William Carlos
Williams “This Is Just To Say”
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Langston Hughes
“I, Too”
Handouts: Poetry Portfolio
Information and Requirements Informational Sheet
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Text: Maya Angelou’s “Caged
Bird”
Handout:
Copy of Maya Angelou’s “Cages
Bird” poem with space in margins to annotate
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Materials:
-Loose pages torn from old
books
-Loose leaf paper for
brainstorming
-Black markers
Slides: “Blackout Poetry”
examples
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Text:
-Copies of Emily Dickinson
poems (6 total – teacher’s choice)
-Tasks for each poem center
Materials:
-Loose leaf paper for
completing tasks
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Instructional and Engagement Strategies
What strategies are you going to
use with your students to keep them engaged throughout the unit of study?
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A dramatic reading of the
poem grabs attention.
Circulating the room while
they work on their sheets to answer questions ensures that they have the
chance to clarify anything that may confuse them.
Students are also allowed to
work in groups to complete this.
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Dramatic readings and minor
analysis of each of the free verse poems mentioned above leads to students
writing their own free verse poems.
Allowing them this
opportunity to be creative and express themselves holds their attention
throughout.
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A dramatic reading of the
poem before launching into analysis grabs attention at first. Some topical
analysis leads into a small series of different tasks which creates a small
challenge and maintains a level of novelty throughout.
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Blackout poetry is a very
creative and hands-on exercise which requires students to look at a page of
text and turn it into something totally different. Students enjoy the
challenge and freedom in this assignment.
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Working in groups is a
novelty in itself. Reading six poems from one author in one day instead of
just one also creates a level of novelty. This assignment also requires
students to remain focused as tasks are times and they are able to move
throughout the room during.
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How are you going to measure the
learning of your students throughout the lesson?
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-Grading of worksheet will
act as formative assessment as the unit will continue past this point.
Student questions during work
time.
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Student questions during
assignment worktime.
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Student questions during
worktime –
When calling on volunteers to
share annotations, teacher can ask for definitions of works mentionedin the
sample.
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Click here to enter
text.
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Student questions during
assignment worktime.
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Summative, Post- Assessment
What post-assessment will
measure the learning progress? Note: This can be the same as the pre-assessment or a modified version of it.
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The post-assessment given for
this unit will be the EUA given for the entire unit. It consists of
approximately 25 different questions asking the students to analyze and
compare two different pomes on the same subject matter.
The first poem is John
McCrae’s “In Flanders Fields” and the second is Sara Teasdale’s “Spring in
War-Time” – both poems are written about the dead and the aftermath of World
War One but treat the subject matter differently. The multiple-choice
questions ask students to answer how they are similar and how they are
different by comparing theme, figurative language use, and perspective within
the poem. Other questions include the identification of author’s intent in
writing, author’s purpose, author’s inspiration, alliteration,
personification, metaphor, and rhyme.
I have not included the test
here because the version that we will use has not yet been finalized by the
ELA department at East; so far only content has been agreed upon and the
questions will be written in the next week.
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STEP Standard 5 - Implementation of
Instructional Unit
Summary of Unit Implementation:
Ultimately,
I felt like this unit had been a success. The students had seemed to enjoy some
of the poems – “The Kraken”, for instance caught their attention because it was
about a giant sea monster – and seemed to really ‘get into’ writing their own
poetry when they were given the chance to do so. They eagerly took part in the
discussion we had about Maya Angelou’s “Caged Bird” and even went so far as to
begin debating each other over some of the finer points of the poem. Student
engagement seemed highest during the days we worked on creating poetry.
Blackout poetry was a smash hit; students were engaged, intrigued, and eager to
begin working on their own.
Summary of Student Learning:
Student
learning seemed to be going well. The classes that this unit was designed for
are 10th grade honors students and they seemed engaged and as though
they were steadily gaining knowledge. The rough scores, however, for the final
assessment did not look promising. I was disappointed by how well they did on
them. Upon investigation, it appears that there was a heavy-handed focus on
analysis and interpretation - which is something that they have struggled with
all year - which is something that the poetry unit wasn’t geared towards
mastering. Citing textual evidence was also an issue during the test – this is
something else that students have struggled with all year. In summary, I think
the students mostly have a new-found and deeper appreciation of poetry as art
and as a means of communication but I am disappointed that the unit did not
seem to help them develop their analysis, interpretation, and citing textual
evidence skills as a whole.
STEP
Standard 6 - Analysis of Student Learning
Post-Test Data:
Whole Class - Once you have
assessed your students’ learning on the topic, collect and analyze the
post-test data to determine the effectiveness of your instruction and assessment.
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Number
of Students
Pre-Test
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Number
of Students
Post-Test
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Exceeds
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3/50
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0/39
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Meets
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13/50
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5/39
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Approaches
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29/50
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18/39
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Falls Far Below
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5/50
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16/39
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Have yet to test
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0/50
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11/50
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Post-Test Analysis: Whole Class
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As a whole, I am disappointed with the results of
the test but have a variety of reasons to explain the poor results. The
pre-test, a TPCASTT analysis of Lord Tennyson’s poem “The Kraken” asked
students to consider the title, the tone/attitude, theme, figurative
language, symbolism, and to paraphrase the poem. The post-assessment asked
students to compare two poems and to consider the themes and author’s choices
in demonstrating those themes; it did ask students to analyze a few forms of
figurative language but also asked them to use textual evidence to support
these answers and this is where they fell short.
Textual evidence is something that the ELA
department at East High School has noticed the students lacking in for years
now and, unfortunately, they have yet to remedy this problem. They aren’t
sure why this has been such an issue but they are sure that this is also
impacting their ability to fully interpret and analyze text and that those
two issues are likely related.
My poetry unit was geared towards analysis but there
was also a focus placed on the technical aspect of poetry. Had I designed the
test, this would have been reflected. However, this end-unit assessment was
designed by the ELA departments for the district several years ago and all
poetry units since then have simply tried to build a unit around that
assessment. I do not believe that this is the right way to go about designing
units but their hands are tied as the district has a variety testing
requirement to be met and this is only one of them. These district
requirements do not always match up to East’s IB methods or ideals, however,
and again this can cause the students at East to fall short simply because it
is not testing precisely what they have been taught.
What I do know about my students learning is that
they ended this unit with a deeper understanding and appreciation of poetry
and that many of them relished the opportunities that were provided to create
their own. Some of the poetry portfolios that I have received from them (the
culmination project) are simply outstanding and clearly demonstrate their
deepened interest in the topic. I know that they have a better understanding
of figurative language – if not a mastery over it – and I know that they were
impressed by the modern poets we read and that many of them found a
connection to the modern perspective in the poems.
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What I do know about my students
learning is that they ended this unit with a deeper understanding and
appreciation of poetry and that many of them relished the opportunities that
were provided to create their own. Some of the poetry portfolios that I have
received from them (the culmination project) are simply outstanding and
clearly demonstrate their deepened interest in the topic. I know that they
have a better understanding of figurative language – if not a mastery over it
– and I know that they were impressed by the modern poets we read and that
many of them found a connection to the modern perspective in the poems. In
this regard, at least, my instruction was effective. It is an unfortunate
truth that there was little in the way of textual evidence or in critical
thinking and analysis integrated into the unit but had there been more, it
still would not have been enough practice to help them master the skills
needed to effectively do that as this is a deep-seated problem that runs much
further back in the district curriculum than 10th grade poetry.
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Post-Assessment Analysis:
Subgroup Selection
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The
selection of subgroup for this class comes from an observation I made earlier
in the semester that the classes seemed to have a slight skew in favor of the
female gender, demographically speaking. Combining this with the knowledge
that I was working with many Gifted and Talented students and that I was a Gifted
and Talented ELA student during my high school career, I was interested in
seeing how this gender subgroup faired compared to the opposite sex. Knowing
that girls nationwide tend to be less involved in the STE(A)M programs and
that they tend to be the higher population group in advanced-level ELA
courses, my curiosity was piqued and the numbers did not fail to fascinate.
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Post-Assessment Data: Gender
Subgroup, Female
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Number
of Students
Pre-Test
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Number
of Students
Post-Test
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Exceeds
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2/28
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0/28
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Meets
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8/28
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4/28
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Approaches
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16/28
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8/28
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Falls Far Below
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2/28
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9/28
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Did Not Test
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0/28
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7/28
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Post-Assessment
Analysis: Subgroup
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Based
on my analysis of the data above for the female students in my two 10th
grade classes regarding this final portion of the poetry unit, it appears
that the female students have a stronger grasp the concepts tested than their
male counterparts do. While it is true that the students are the larger
gender population in the classes this could also be because they are honors
courses and looking at Gifted and Talented statistics, more girls are
considered gifted and talented in the reading/writing categories than males. While
this doesn’t appear to be based on any scientific evidence, it is a societal
construct that boys are more often adept and encouraged in the mathematics/science
field while girls are more often encouraged in the direction of language
arts. This may have impacted the way that these girls chose their advanced
courses and the same can be said of the boys despite the fact that their
strengths may be greater in other areas.
Alternatively,
the girls may have fared better when it came to analyzing poetry for mood and
tone because they may be more in touch with their own emotions as a female
teenager. Again, this is merely speculation but I suspect that many of the
boys in these classes would agree that girls are better at dealing with
emotional things than they are.
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It appears that my instruction worked
better for this subgroup than the other. As to why I can only speculate and
there are many other factors to consider. For example, this test was taken on
a Monday immediately following the week that the students were in and out of
school on an irregular schedule taking the CMAS (Colorado Measure of Academic
Standards) and the PSAT/SAT. At this point, they were very likely “over”
testing and may not have made an excellent effort.
However, I can safely say that my unit
did not place as much an emphasis on analysis and interpretation as the test
did and that, combined with the long-standing issue of students struggling
with locating textual evidence. My unit focused more on the figurative
language and the technical aspects of poetry. We did cover some analysis and
interpretation but it was not a focus.
While this poetry unit is entirely over,
I can help them by focusing more on interpretation and analysis by practicing
those ideas on other texts. With enough practice, they will eventually be at
the skill level that that assessment would have liked though I cannot say
with certainty when that would be.
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Post-Assessment Data: Remainder
of Class
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Number of Students
Pre-Test
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Number of Students
Post-Test
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Exceeds
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1/22
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0/22
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Meets
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5/22
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1/22
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Approaches
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13/22
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10/22
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Falls Far Below
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3/22
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7/22
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Did
Not Test
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0/22
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4/22
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Post-Assessment
Analysis: Subgroup and Remainder of Class
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As previously explained, it doesn’t seem
to me that there was anything entirely wrong with the applied teaching
methodologies because my students then later demonstrated competency on what
the unit focused on but the fault lies within the contents of the unit versus
the contents of the district-mandated assessment. Instead of allowing
teachers to design a test that best reflects their unit, teachers are
required to design a unit that best reflects the test. However, if a teacher
designed a unit to reflect the test entirely, students would take very little
interest in poetry at all. My goal in creating the unit that I did was to
have my students walk away with a deeper appreciation for poetry as an
artform while also being able to identify and explain the technical aspects
of poetry. In this regard, I feel as though expectations were met. This test
does not feel like an accurate representation of the contents of the unit I
designed or the teaching methodologies used to present that content. It is frustrating
to see these results because this test did not test them on things like being
able to create their own or being able to explain their emotional reaction to
the problem, instead it had a heavy-handed focus on theme and analysis which,
considering the extremely personal nature of poetry would be arbitrary at
best.
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This test marked the end of involvement
with poetry for the 10th grade classes. It will not be seen again
until sometime in 11th or 12th grade; it is because of
this that it is difficult to design an objective that would continue to
enhance their understanding of the ideas contained within. However, the
students do need further experience with citing textual evidence or
evaluating theme from textual analysis. Something that might be useful to
cover in coming days would be the idea of theme itself and to discover the
difference between theme and topic as the two are often confused and
miss-taught. One way to do this is to present the students with a very simple
story – like one found in a children’s book – and to then walk students
through the process of identifying theme and topic. And objective for this
might look like “Students will be able to identify and explain the difference
between topic and theme as they are presented in Leo Lionni’s ‘A Color of His
Own’”. Students can then keep this process in mind and apply the steps to
identifying the topic and theme of other works.
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STEP
Standard 7 – Reflecting on Instruction to Improve Student Progress
Improved Practice
Based on the Unit of Study
Based
on the experience of developing and delivering your instructional unit, list
three short-term goals to improve specific areas of your teaching practice
based on the unit of instruction and describe your plan to reach each
short-term goal.
Short-Term Goal
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Plan to Reach
the Goal (i.e.,
professional development, research on the Internet, observation of a veteran
teacher, etc.)
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1. Include
more written responses to increase student familiarity with traditional literature
analysis.
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-Research on the internet for how to
introduce the traditional format of literature analysis in a high school
level classroom.
-Discuss with veteran ELA teachers
regarding written literature analysis and their suggestions for approaching
it.
-Brainstorm a list of questions that
could apply to any text that would spark the critical analysis process.
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2. Improve
overall classroom management skills.
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-Observe a variety of veteran teachers
in different disciplines to see their management techniques and approaches.
-Research on the internet for management
guides for first year teachers in the modern era.
-Brainstorm a list of innovative ways to
get the rules across to students without the need for constant reminders.
-Brainstorm a list of reasonable repercussions
for breaking those rules before the issue needs to leave the classroom for a
higher level of intervention.
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3. Increase
the number of incidences that students are required to think critically of an
author’s intent and action to play out that intent, leading to a better
understanding of textual purpose.
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-Research ways to spark critical
thinking.
-Introduce the list of ‘literature
analysis questions’ to the class and ask them to use those questions to guide
their answers during a class discussion.
-Attempt different forms of student
conversation formats in the ELA classroom (Socratic seminar, round-robin,
etc.) to determine which works best for which class.
-Discuss with veteran teachers in the
ELA department which conversation formats they have tried, which they have
had success with, and what improvements they would make to what they have
tried.
-Create a list of discussion guidelines
that include respectful silence for the speaker and perhaps some kind of
symbol that would indicate which student ‘has the floor’.
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